Hallo,
ich habe ein Essay über:
Mass production: It`s developement and implications geschrieben.
Wäre echt toll wenn irgendjemand drüber schauen würde.
Danke schon einmal im vorraus.
Essay mass production
It´s developement and implications
Mass prodcution ist the production of large amounts of standarzied products on production lines.
It was popularised by Henry Ford´s T Model in the early 20th Century.
now almost every big company uses this idea to produce big series of goods.
Henry Ford, i told, was the first who used the idea of mass prodcution with his T-model.
the idea was developed in Venice hundreds years earlier. ships were mass-produced by using assembly lines.
They are produced nearly one ship per day. The Venice Arsenal employed 16.000 people.
Then , in the mid-1400s mass prodcution has been commonplace. Johannes Gutenberg’s bible was printed by using a printing press.
Later, during the American Civil war, the Springfied Amoury started to produce guns on large scale.
After that, on the industrial revolution simple mass production were used to produce clocks and more.
Also Mc Donals’s introduced mass prodcution in the 1920’s. Now almost every fast food chain uses this idea.
Summarising, we can see that mass production developed quickly.
almost every mass procuct is produced by that technique.
Correction Essay
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boert
Essay mass production
It´s Its developement and implications
Mass prodcution is the production of large amounts of standardized products on production lines.
Itwas popularised by became popular when Henry Ford started producing his T-Model in the early 20th Century.
Now almost every bigger company uses this ideato produce of producing big series of goods.
Henry Ford,i told as I mentioned before, was the first who used the idea of mass prodcution with his T-model. (Who was Henry Ford and what is a T-Model?)
The idea was developed in Venice hundreds years earlier when ships were mass-produced by using assembly lines.
They are (tense) produced nearly one ship per day. The Venice Arsenal employed 16.000 people.
Then , in the mid-1400s mass prodcution has been commonplace (??). Johannes Gutenbergs bible was printed by using a printing press.
Later, during the American Civil war, the Springfied Amoury started to produce guns on large scale.
After that,on during the industrial revolution simple mass production were was used to produce clocks and more.
Also Mc Donals’s introduced mass prodcution in the 1920’s. Now almost every fast food chain uses this idea.
Summarising we can say that mass production developed quickly.
Almost every mass procuct is produced by that technique.
Hochkommata macht man für gewöhnlich nicht per accent, sondern mit der #-Taste neben der Return-Taste.
Mass prodcution is the production of large amounts of standardized products on production lines.
It
Now almost every bigger company uses this idea
Henry Ford,
The idea was developed in Venice hundreds years earlier when ships were mass-produced by using assembly lines.
They are (tense) produced nearly one ship per day. The Venice Arsenal employed 16.000 people.
Then , in the mid-1400s mass prodcution has been commonplace (??). Johannes Gutenbergs bible was printed by using a printing press.
Later, during the American Civil war, the Springfied Amoury started to produce guns on large scale.
After that,
Also Mc Donals’s introduced mass prodcution in the 1920’s. Now almost every fast food chain uses this idea.
Summarising we can say that mass production developed quickly.
Almost every mass procuct is produced by that technique.
Hochkommata macht man für gewöhnlich nicht per accent, sondern mit der #-Taste neben der Return-Taste.
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englischistnichteinfach
Erstmal herzlichen dank, schön das es sowas gibt! 
Also nochmal , ist es so besser:
Der Originaltext, also worauf meine Niederschrift beruht, ist übrigens von UK wikipedia -> mass production
Essay mass production
Its development and implications
Mass prodcution ist the production of large amounts of standardized products on production lines.
It became popular when Henry Ford started producing his T Model in the early 20th Century.
Now almost every bigger company uses this idea of producing big series of goods.
Henry Ford, an automotive manufacturer, as i mentioned before, was the first who used the idea of mass prodcution with his T-Model.
the idea was developed in Venice hundreds years earlier when ships were mass-produced by using assembly lines.
They are produced nearly one ship per day. The Venice Arsenal employed 16.000 people.
Later , in the mid-1400s mass prodcution has been commonplace since Johannes Gutenberg’s bible was printed by using a printing press.
Then, during the American Civil war, the Springfied Amoury started to produce guns on large scale.
After that, during the industrial revolution simple mass production was used to produce clocks and more.
Also Mc Donals’s introduced mass prodcution in the 1920’s. Now almost every fast food chain uses this idea.
Summarising, we can say that mass production developed quickly.
almost every mass procuct is produced by that technique.
Also nochmal , ist es so besser:
Der Originaltext, also worauf meine Niederschrift beruht, ist übrigens von UK wikipedia -> mass production
Essay mass production
Its development and implications
Mass prodcution ist the production of large amounts of standardized products on production lines.
It became popular when Henry Ford started producing his T Model in the early 20th Century.
Now almost every bigger company uses this idea of producing big series of goods.
Henry Ford, an automotive manufacturer, as i mentioned before, was the first who used the idea of mass prodcution with his T-Model.
the idea was developed in Venice hundreds years earlier when ships were mass-produced by using assembly lines.
They are produced nearly one ship per day. The Venice Arsenal employed 16.000 people.
Later , in the mid-1400s mass prodcution has been commonplace since Johannes Gutenberg’s bible was printed by using a printing press.
Then, during the American Civil war, the Springfied Amoury started to produce guns on large scale.
After that, during the industrial revolution simple mass production was used to produce clocks and more.
Also Mc Donals’s introduced mass prodcution in the 1920’s. Now almost every fast food chain uses this idea.
Summarising, we can say that mass production developed quickly.
almost every mass procuct is produced by that technique.
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englischistnichteinfach
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boert
Its development and implications
"Mass prodcution" is the production of large amounts of standardized products on production lines.
It became popular when Henry Ford started producing his T Model in the early 20th Century.
Now almost every bigger company uses this idea of producing big series of goods on such assmbly lines.
Henry Ford, an car manufacturer, as i mentioned before, was the first who used the idea of mass prodcution with his T-Model.
The idea itself was developed in Venice hundreds years earlier when ships were mass-produced by using assembly lines.
They are produced nearly one ship per day. (Grammar)
The Venice Arsenal employed 16.000 people worked there.
Later , in the mid-1400ies, mass prodcution has been commonplace since Johannes Gutenberg’s bible was printed by using a printing press. (Mir erschließt sich der Sinn des Satzes nicht so wirklich...)
Then, during the American Civil war, the Springfied Amoury started to produce guns on large scale.
After that, during the industrial revolution, simple mass production was used to produce clocks and more.
Also Mc Donals’s introduced mass prodcution in the 1920’s. Now almost every fast food chain uses this idea.
Summarising, we can say that mass production developed quickly.
Almost every mass procuct is produced by that technique.
"Mass prodcution" is the production of large amounts of standardized products on production lines.
It became popular when Henry Ford started producing his T Model in the early 20th Century.
Now almost every bigger company uses this idea of producing big series of goods on such assmbly lines.
Henry Ford, an car manufacturer, as i mentioned before, was the first who used the idea of mass prodcution with his T-Model.
The idea itself was developed in Venice hundreds years earlier when ships were mass-produced by using assembly lines.
They are produced nearly one ship per day. (Grammar)
Later , in the mid-1400ies, mass prodcution has been commonplace since Johannes Gutenberg’s bible was printed by using a printing press. (Mir erschließt sich der Sinn des Satzes nicht so wirklich...)
Then, during the American Civil war, the Springfied Amoury started to produce guns on large scale.
After that, during the industrial revolution, simple mass production was used to produce clocks and more.
Also Mc Donals’s introduced mass prodcution in the 1920’s. Now almost every fast food chain uses this idea.
Summarising, we can say that mass production developed quickly.
Almost every mass procuct is produced by that technique.