Bitte um kurze Korrektur

[Ahriman]

Hey,
ich musste eine Einleitung schreiben, kann mir diese bitte jemand korrigieren?

The above illustrated cartoon is dealing with the law on arms.
This complex and demanding subject gets more and more discussed by politicians in the last few years and it will be surely not less interesting in the future. But there are not only politicians and other cognoscenti who give raising attention to this subject matter. There are above all social interacting groups who are exerting increasing pressure on the policy and economy.


Vielen Dank schonmal

[boert]

Theabove illustrated cartoon above is dealing with the law on arms.
This complex and demanding subject gets has more and more been discussed by politicians in over the last few years and it will surely not be surely less interesting in the future. But there are not only politicians and other cognoscenti(?) who give raising pay more and more attention to this subject matter.
There areAnd above all, there are social interacting groups, who are exerting to increasinge the pressure on the policy and economy.