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One of the important inventions is the television. Today you found a television set into most households.
In the following text I want to tell you something about the dangers of the medium.
The medium “television” is today, without question the most important informationsource.
But, information´s can be wrong. People those look tv often cannot differentiate of truth or lie.
TV transmitters falsify or let information away around the contribution make more exciting.
Thus the contribution is noticedother one by persons. In the Gulf War that became very clear.
On the television one did not see pictures of the clean war, clean attacks meeting innocent.
But the reality looked other one.
In my opinion television is the most important source of information at all. Even if one already
very well to reflect must differentiate around truth from lie.
Text ca. 100 Wörter
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Greg
Re: Text ca. 100 Wörter
One of the important inventions is television. Today you find a television set in almost every household.
In the following text I want to tell you something about the dangers of the medium.
The medium “television” is today, without question the most important source of information .
But information can be wrong. People who watch TV often cannot differentiate between truth or lie.
TV broadcasters falsify or withhold information to make....?... more exciting.
Thus the contribution is noticedother one by persons???. In the Gulf War that became very clear.
On television one did not see pictures of the clean war, clean attacks meeting innocent. ????
But the reality looked other one. (different?)
In my opinion television is the most important source of information of all. Even if one already
very well to reflect must differentiate around truth from lie.[/quote]
Wiederholungen, unklarer Standpunkt.
Wo hast du differentiate around her? Nimm ein dictionary zu Hilfe.
In the following text I want to tell you something about the dangers of the medium.
The medium “television” is today, without question the most important source of information .
But information can be wrong. People who watch TV often cannot differentiate between truth or lie.
TV broadcasters falsify or withhold information to make....?... more exciting.
Thus the contribution is noticedother one by persons???. In the Gulf War that became very clear.
On television one did not see pictures of the clean war, clean attacks meeting innocent. ????
But the reality looked other one. (different?)
In my opinion television is the most important source of information of all. Even if one already
very well to reflect must differentiate around truth from lie.[/quote]
Wiederholungen, unklarer Standpunkt.
Wo hast du differentiate around her? Nimm ein dictionary zu Hilfe.
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Cliff
Re: Text ca. 100 Wörter
coreone hat geschrieben:In the following text Iwantwould like to tell you something about the dangers of the medium.