Ich benötige schnelle Hilfe für eine mündliche Prüfung die ich morgen halte.
Es wird nach folgenden Kriterien benotet:
Personal Data
qualification
skills
hobbies
likes/dislikes
character
future:private
future: job
Hier mein Text:
Good Morning
First I want to introduce myself. My name is Mike and I´m eighteen years old. Me and my family live in Hamburg. I have a little sister. Her name is Sabrina and she´s fifteen years old. My parents Thomas and Claudia are living seperate appartements. Me and my sister, we live with our mother together. We also have two little cats on our side. There names are Neko (which is an japanese name) and Rocky.
My absolute favourite Hobby is music in different variations, but my favourite music is J-Pop and Hip Hop.
In addition I also like webdesign, martial arts and hanging out with friends. I´m very interested in the asian culture, especially in the japanese.
My Zodiac Sign says that geminis are intelligent, friendly and helpful, but they can be lazy. I think my character is one of these geminis.
I´m a friendly person who likes to get in contact with new people. But I´m also lazy.
After the 10th grade of the higher secondary school I got my leaving certificate. Then I visited a grammar school for about one year. But it was too difficult for me, so I changed to this school. I never had an traineeship while school.
I think I have a few practical skills. For example I´m reliable and flexibel. I like it to communicate with people.
In the future I want to live in Japan or China in a big house. I hope I will have wife with children and we live happy together.
It is hard to say what I want to become, because I´m not sure. I could imagine to work as a webdesigner or as an management assistant in real estate.
That was my little introduction. I hope you like it. Thanks for listening.
Tipps, Änderungen, Kritik??
Schnelle Hilfe benötigt.
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Sleepy
Hallo,
ich hab mich jetzt bisschen mal an die Verbesserung gemacht,kann dir aber nicht garantieren dass alles richtig ist,ich hoffe es aber schon *gg*
Good Morning
First I would like to introduce myself. My name is Mike and I´m eighteen years old. I live with my family in Hamburg. I have a little sister,her name is Sabrina and she´s fifteen years old. My parents Thomas and Claudia are divorced, they live in separate appartements. My sister and I live at our mothers house.so würd ichs vielleicht formmulieren ... We also have two little cats on our side was bedeutet das on our side?. Their names are Neko (which is a japanese name) and Rocky. an kommt nur wenn danach ein Vokal kommt,z.B. an elephant
My favourite ich glaub favourite reicht,weil es ja schon lieblings- heißt Hobby is music in different variations and my favourite music is J-Pop and Hip Hop.
In addition I also like webdesign, martial arts and hanging out with friends. I´m very interested in the Asian Länder,Kontinente groß culture, especially in the Japanese one. glaub das one gehört noch dazu
My sign of the zodiac says that geminis are intelligent, friendly and helpful, but they can be lazy too. I think some of those characteristics do relate to me.
I´m a friendly person who likes to get in contact with new people. But I´m also lazy.
After 10th grade of the higher secondary school I got my leaving certificate. Then I visited a grammar school for about a year. But it was too difficult for me, so I changed to this school. I have never had a traineeship while school.
I think I have a few practical skills. For example I´m reliable, flexible and I like to communicate with people.
In the future I want to live in Japan or China in a big house. I wanna get married one day and have some children and live happily together with them. net so sicher ob das stimmt,obs dir passt ...
It is hard to say what I want to become because I´m not sure yet. I could imagine to work as a webdesigner or as a management assistant in real estate das weiß ich nicht.
This was my little introduction. I hope you liked it. Thank you is höflicher ...?for listening.
ich hab mich jetzt bisschen mal an die Verbesserung gemacht,kann dir aber nicht garantieren dass alles richtig ist,ich hoffe es aber schon *gg*
Good Morning
First I would like to introduce myself. My name is Mike and I´m eighteen years old. I live with my family in Hamburg. I have a little sister,her name is Sabrina and she´s fifteen years old. My parents Thomas and Claudia are divorced, they live in separate appartements. My sister and I live at our mothers house.so würd ichs vielleicht formmulieren ... We also have two little cats on our side was bedeutet das on our side?. Their names are Neko (which is a japanese name) and Rocky. an kommt nur wenn danach ein Vokal kommt,z.B. an elephant
My favourite ich glaub favourite reicht,weil es ja schon lieblings- heißt Hobby is music in different variations and my favourite music is J-Pop and Hip Hop.
In addition I also like webdesign, martial arts and hanging out with friends. I´m very interested in the Asian Länder,Kontinente groß culture, especially in the Japanese one. glaub das one gehört noch dazu
My sign of the zodiac says that geminis are intelligent, friendly and helpful, but they can be lazy too. I think some of those characteristics do relate to me.
I´m a friendly person who likes to get in contact with new people. But I´m also lazy.
After 10th grade of the higher secondary school I got my leaving certificate. Then I visited a grammar school for about a year. But it was too difficult for me, so I changed to this school. I have never had a traineeship while school.
I think I have a few practical skills. For example I´m reliable, flexible and I like to communicate with people.
In the future I want to live in Japan or China in a big house. I wanna get married one day and have some children and live happily together with them. net so sicher ob das stimmt,obs dir passt ...
It is hard to say what I want to become because I´m not sure yet. I could imagine to work as a webdesigner or as a management assistant in real estate das weiß ich nicht.
This was my little introduction. I hope you liked it. Thank you is höflicher ...?for listening.
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Cliff
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MeMyselfAndI
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Papaya
@MeMyselfAndI
Cliff hat schon Recht. Es steht nur da, dass sie getrennt wohnen, aber nicht, ob sie getrennt sind. Das ist schon ein enormer Unterschied. Aber in dem Fall wolltest du wohl genau das mit deinen Worten ausdrücken.
Ich finde es, anbei bemerkt, irgendwie erschreckend, wie kurzfristig sich manche Leute auf so wichtige Dinge vorbereiten.
Aber vielleicht sind die ja nur alle flexibler als ich.
Meine Referate sind im Normalfall etliche Tage vor dem Termin fertig.
Aber scheint wohl heute so üblich zu sein, am Abend zuvor schnell noch alles zurecht zu machen für den nächsten Tag.
Das erklärt auch dieses Phänomen, dass von Donnerstag Nachmittag bis Sonntag Totenstille im Forum herrscht, aber es Sonntag Abend immer regelrecht überflutet wird von Hilferufen, weil die Schüler erst am Sonntag Abend ihre Hausaufgaben machen, die sie schon seit Freitag auf haben.
Cliff hat schon Recht. Es steht nur da, dass sie getrennt wohnen, aber nicht, ob sie getrennt sind. Das ist schon ein enormer Unterschied. Aber in dem Fall wolltest du wohl genau das mit deinen Worten ausdrücken.
Ich finde es, anbei bemerkt, irgendwie erschreckend, wie kurzfristig sich manche Leute auf so wichtige Dinge vorbereiten.
Aber vielleicht sind die ja nur alle flexibler als ich.Meine Referate sind im Normalfall etliche Tage vor dem Termin fertig.
Aber scheint wohl heute so üblich zu sein, am Abend zuvor schnell noch alles zurecht zu machen für den nächsten Tag.
Das erklärt auch dieses Phänomen, dass von Donnerstag Nachmittag bis Sonntag Totenstille im Forum herrscht, aber es Sonntag Abend immer regelrecht überflutet wird von Hilferufen, weil die Schüler erst am Sonntag Abend ihre Hausaufgaben machen, die sie schon seit Freitag auf haben.
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boert
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Cliff
nicht.