Hallo leute
ich muss demnächst ein referat auf englisch halten. und als kleine stütze hab ich mir nen kleinen text geschrieben. wenn es nicht zu viele umstände macht wäre es nett von euch den mal durchzugehen.
wenn nicht dann bitte ich drum diese 2 sätze mal anzuschauen
1. have you ever hear something about the band?
2. notable is, that the band still sells that well, after 23 years consistency.
2. soll in deutsch heissen: Bemerkenswert(bewundernswert) ist, dass sie sich nach 23 jährigem bestehen immer noch so gut verkaufen.
Solltet ihr meinen text durchgehen, bitte ich euch nicht zu viel schwere wärter zu verwenden.
hoffe ihr helft mir
mfg flo
p.s. glatt was vergessen^^ hxxp://uploaded.to/?id=ba0815 mein referat, die xx durch tt ersetzen
Eurokom
Hello, my name is florian and today I will tell you something about my trip to the liveconcert of my favorite musicband in stuttgart“the red hot chilli peppers”. have you ever hear something about the band?
Ok first of all I would like to show you the members of the band.
On this photo you can see the frontsinger “Anthony Kiedis” He is one founder of the band. He was born in 1962. Another founder was Anthony’s best friend Michael Balzary also called Flea. (Flea bild zeigen) Flea was born in 1962 too and he plays the bass.
Other members of the band are Chad Smith, the drummer and John Frusciante the guitarist. This is the current constellations of the band. (Bilder von chad und john zeigen)
notable is, that the band still sells that well, after 23 years consistency.
Ok do you have any questions about the bandmembers?
(In the past Anthony and Flea gave names from comics to each other, and one comic hero was named Flea.)
Now I tell you something about my concert trip. Michael, Felix, Marcel and Felix were with me at the concert. here is a picture which was made in the train from Öhringen to heilbronn. And that’s me with a ticket. (2bilder zeigen)
Our trip to Stuttgart took over 1 and a half hour.
After our arriving in Stuttgart we were hungry and needed some food. So we went to a nearly placed burger king. Here on this photo you can see how much we ate. *lachen*.(bild zeigen)
After our meal we went to the underground station to look for a train. On this picture you can see how bored we were before the undergrountrain arrived.
In the train we met other fans of the red hot chilli peppers. For example one man who was about fifty years old. That was surprising me.
On 18.30 we stand in front of the Schleyerhall. I have two pictures, on one you can see our good mood, we all were very happy to see our favourite music group and on the other you can see to a neon sign with the inscription red hot chilli peppers.
Then we looked for our seats. After we found our seats we asked some girls to take a picture of us five, and here you can see the result (bild zeigen). Our seats were on the right side of the stage.
Then, exactly at 20 o`clock the opening act began to play. Here is a picture of the band ”mike watt and the missing men. We didn´t like the band, because they played terrible music.
We were happy when they stopped to play and when they went down of the stage. They played half an hour and after that, the crew of the schleyerhall cleaned the stage for the peppers.
On this picture you can see a lots of fans. Exactly 14 thousand fans were in the hall at this night.
On 21.30 the red hot chilli peppers began to play. Flea and John began with a guitar and bass session and then they lead over to one of my favourite song “can’t stop”. (Here you can see Flea and John at the beginning.) Anthony came out of the background and began to dance and jump all around the stage. The red hot chilli peppers played with one solo act from john all in all about 15 songs. John is also a good singer, later I will show you a sample of his talent.
This picture I took during the song “by the way”. We all were very happy to see the pepper live
At 11 o’clock p.m. we were sad, because my brother getting tired of waiting of us. He took us back home and this was the end of our exiting trip to Stuttgart.
Hello, my name is florian and today I willI'm going to tell you something about my trip to the liveconcert of my favorite musicband, the "red hot chilli peppers", in stuttgart “the red hot chilli peppers”.
Have you ever heard something about of the band?
Ok first of all I would like to show you the members of the band.
On this photo you can see the frontsinger “Anthony Kiedis” He is one of the founders(of the band). He was born in 1962. Another founder was is Anthony’s best friend Michael Balzary, also called Flea.
(Flea bild zeigen)
Flea was born in 1962 too and he plays the bass. The other members (of the band)are Chad Smith, the drummer and John Frusciante, the guitarist. This is the current constellations of the band.
(Bilder von chad und john zeigen)
Notable is, that the band still sells that well, after 23 years consistency.
Ok do you have any questions about the bandmembers?
(In the past Anthony and Flea gave each other names from comics to each other, and one comic hero was named Flea.)
Now I tell you something about my concert trip. Michael, Felix, Marcel and Felix were with me at the concert. here is a picture which was made in the train from Öhringen to heilbronn. And that’s me with a ticket.
(2bilder zeigen)
Our trip to Stuttgart took over one and a half hour.
After our arriving we arrived in Stuttgart we were hungry and needed some food. So we went to a nearly placed burger king. Here on this photo you can see how much we ate. *lachen*.
(bild zeigen)
After our meal we went to the underground station to look for a train. On this picture you can see how bored we were before the undergrountrain -railroad/or simply "subway" arrived. In On the train we met other fans of the red hot chilli peppers. For example one man who was about fifty years old. That was surprising surprised me.
On 18.30 we stand (tense!) in front of the Schleyerhall. I have two pictures, on one you can see our good mood, we all were very happy to see our favourite music group and on the other you can see to a neon sign with the inscription red hot chilli peppers.
Then we looked for our seats. After we had found our seats them we asked some girls to take a picture of us five, and here you can see the result
(bild zeigen).
Our seats were on the right side of the stage.
Then, exactly at 20 o`clock the opening act began to play. Here is a picture of the band ”mike watt and the missing men". We didn´t like the band, because they played terrible music.
We were happy when they stopped to play playing and when they went down off the stage. They played half an hour and after that, the crew of the schleyerhall cleaned the stage for the peppers.
On this picture you can see a lots of fans. Exactly 14thousand fans were in the hall at this night.
On 21.30 the red hot chilli peppers began to play. Flea and John began with a guitar and bass session and then they lead over to one of my favourite song, called “can’t stop”.
(Here you can see Flea and John at the beginning.)
Anthony came out of the background and began to dance and jump all around over the stage. The red hot chilli peppers played with one solo act from john all in all about 15 songs. John is also a good singer, later I will show you a sample of his talent. I took This picture I took during the song “by the way”. We all were very happy to see the peppers live
At 11 o’clock p.m. we were sad, because my brother got getting tired of waiting of for us. He took us back home and this was the end of our exiting trip to Stuttgart.
Für ein Referat ist aber ein fortlaufender text nicht so von Vorteil, will ich nur mal anmerken.
Normalerweise macht man sich Stichpunkte, und formuliert die Sätze dann vor der Klasse halt aus und verknüpft sie miteinander.
Bei nem fortlaufenden Text ist erstens die Gefahr gegeben, dass das Referat abgelesen wirkt (und das gibt Punkteabzug beim Lehrer und langweilt die Schüler), und es passiert leicht, dass man mal rauskommt und dann so shcnell nicht mehr rein findet, weil man in der Zeile verrutscht ist oder Ähnliches.
Also nicht ON this picture...alles klar, verstanden, abgespeichert
noch zu papaya, das weis ich schon, letztes jahr ist mir das passiert. auswendig gelernt, durcheinander gekommen...
ich habs gestern mal geprobt, noch mit meinem text und da haben sich nur manche sätze auswendig gelertn angehört. ich denke ich mach das alles improvisorisch...trotzdem danke
