I lost my leg...

[KCy]

... zumindest soll ich mich in jemanden hinein versetzen, der ein bein verloren hat und eine STrory drüber schreiben.

Es wäre so lieb, wenn ihn mal jemand durchsehen könnte.

Schonmal ein dickes Dankeschön:
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I have a look on my alarm clock. Oh no! It`s already 7.45 o’clock in the morning. I am too late. I have to hurry up and wash my face, brush my teeth and comb my hair.

I don't have a car and I can’t go by bike, because I lost my right left by an accident with my horse Pilgrim. Now I live with my parents on the other side of town from my school. So I needs help of my dad, who brings me to school with his car, every day.

I called his name. “Dad, you`ve foget to wake myself. I am too late. Please bring me to school!”
I feel bad. Since my right leg has to be amputated, are my classmates so nice to me. They have pity for my situation. But it would be harder for me. I just wanted to be normal. I wished, I could time turned back.

I lost more than my friend Judith and my right leg. The accident destroyed my life. I lost the good relationships to my best friends, I lost my wishes and dreams.

I can’t speak aobout it with everyone. The mental pain is too hard for me. It`s unbearable.
Now I am at school. My dad brings me to the corner rather and I have to limp to the school day. Today we have three hours of sport. Since my accident I can`t do it. In past I was one of the best in this subject. Now I watch sad to my classmates go in for sport. I feel so lonely.

[boert]

I have a look on atmy alarm clock. Oh no! It`s already 7.45 (o’clock) in the morning. I am too late. I have to hurry up and wash my face, brush my teeth and comb my hair.

I don't have a car and I can’t go by bike, because I lost my right leg by in an accident with my horse Pilgrim. Now I live with my parents and my school is on the other side of the townfrom my school. So I needs help of from my dad (Or: I need my dad's help), who brings me to school with his car every day.

I called his name (Zeitsprung!). “Dad, you`ve fogetto wake myself me up. I am too late. Please bring me to school!”
I feel bad. Since my right leg hasd to be amputated, are my classmates are so nice to me. They have pity for on my situation. But it would be harder for me. I just wanted to be normal. I wished, I could time turned back. (Zeitsprung!)

I lost more than my friend Judith and my right leg. The accident destroyed my life. I lost the good relationships to my best friends, I lost my wishes and dreams.

I can’t speak talk about it with everyone (Meinst du irgendjemanden? Dann anybody). The mental pain is too hard for me. It`s unbearable.
Now I am at school. My dad brings me to the corner rather(??) and I have to limp to the school day. Today we have three hours of sports. Since my accident I can`t do it (anymore). In past I was one of the best in this subject. Now I watch sadly to my classmates going in for sport. I feel so lonely.

[Papaya]

Das ist das seltsamste, was ich jemals gelesen hab.
Wir mussten auch schon eine Geschichte über Rudolph the rednosed raindeer schreiben, oder ein Wanted-Plakat für Robin Hood erstellen oder einen Text aus "Roots" fortführen, aber wir mussten noch nie so tun, als hätten wir ein Bein verloren..
Das finde ich auch irgendwie ein bisschen heftig.

Was ich eigentlich sagen wollte:

I don't have a car and I can’t go by bike, because I lost my right leg by an accident with my horse Pilgrim.

Muss da nicht in an accident stehen?
Mein Gefühl würde mir sagen: Ja. Aber wenn boert das nicht anstreicht, dann muss es ja eigentlich schon fast so stimmen..

[boert]

Natürlich muß da "in" stehen.

*schamesrotwegschleich*

[KCy]

Hehe... dankeschön.

Ja, ich weiß. Oben habe ich die Aufgabe ganz schön seltsam geschildert, aber ich war so in Hektik.

Doch wo ihr mir so nett geholfen habt, sollt ihr auch wissen, was es mit dem Text auf sich hat.

Wir nehmen im Moment im Unterricht das Thema "Relationships" durch. Dazu haben wir einen langen Text bekommen, in dem es um das Mädchen Grace geht, welches ihr Bein bei einem Reitunfall verloren hat (ähnlich wie im Film "Der Pferdeflüsterer").

Nachdem Grace wieder in die Schule geht, verhalten sich die Mitschüler ih gegenüber anders. Sehr nett, aber distanziert.

Mit dem körperlichen Schmerz kommt sie klar, aber mit dem seelischen nicht. Letztendlich weil der seelische viel schlimmer ist...


Nun war es eine freiwillige HA, sich einen Tag lang in Grace hineinzuversetzen.