Ich schreibe gerade eine Bewerbung an eine Schule in England und bin gerade bei dem ''Letter of application from student'' angekommen. Dort heißt es:
''This should include, for example, your reasons for choosing the IB course* at xyz(der Schulname); the background to your interests in the subjects** you wish to study; your career aspirations; your social, sporting or other interests and activities."
*IB = International Baccalaureate = ein Schulabschluss, sowas wie A-levels oder Abitur.
**subjects= Chemie, Geschichte, Kunst (und Mathe, Deutsch, Englisch, auf diese werd' ich aber nicht eingehen)
Ich wollte nun fragen, ob ihr vielleicht einmal kurz darüberschauen könnt und eventuell mir sagen könnt, wo ich Fehler habe.
''Well, let me see. About one year ago I started to gather(oder collect?) information about spending one or two years abroad to make my school leaving qualification in an English-speaking country.
After a couple of weeks I came upon the International Baccalaureate Diploma Programme and got enthusiastic about it and finally/eventually about your school, too.
As to the subjects I can say that I always loved sciences an visual arts. Chemistry, physics and visual arts have been my favourite subjects since I can remember. I like to carry out experiments with my class mates and in those subjects you learn every day new and interesting things. I also love to draw, paint and desing in the visual arts class. And I also took an interest in history lately, because I think it's important and quite interesting to know what happened in the world before our generation.
Right now I have no specific career aspirations. I can(could?) imagine to do something in the art/design line* as well as in the management line*, in the chemistry or science line* or last but not least in the architect line*. As you can see there is a wide range of careers I could imagine to follow, but as I said before I'm not sure right now.
In my spare time I like to go out with my freinds** or play or train with my two dogs.
A few years ago I took piano and cello lessons and since one and a half years I play the guitar, what I really like (oder enjoy?).''
*line: ich will hiermit Branche ausdrücken, oder auch ''in Richtung Kunst/Design, Management, ....''
**eigentlich will ich ausdrücken, dass ich halt etwas mit meinem Freunden unternehme und nicht 'ausgehe' ... ich weiß aber nicht wie ich dies ausdrücken soll.
Ich versuche auch schon die ganze Zeit einen Schlussatz zu finden, mir fällt aber nichts ein, habt ihr vielleicht eine Idee??
Vielen Dank schonmal
Marc
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