Abend,
für meine Englischlehrerin sollte ich eine kleine "Zusammenfassung" (im weitesten Sinne) über die Teenie-Zeitschrift "Bravo" schreiben. Natürlich auf Englisch. Vielleicht hat ja jemand Lust und Zeit meinen kleinen Text durchzulesen und bestimmte Stellen ggf. zu korrigieren.
Summary about the up to date Bravo
Yesterday I bought the up to date Bravo to make a summary about it. I found many articles about the most popular singers and groups for teenagers. For example the boy group "US5". Many girls love them and now want the boys start to conquer the charts of Asia.
In Bravo you can also find much about your body and the life of a teenager. Girls especially can find many articles on how to make themselves look stylish. You can get tipps on where to find the nicest lipstick and how to apply your eyeshadow for get many looks from other girls and handsome boys.
For girls and boys who like posters, Bravo has many posters and pictures in their magazine. You can cut them out and hang them up on the wall in your room. If you have luck maybe your parents will allow you to hang them up all over the house (or flat).
2 weeks ago Bravo had a birthday and became 50 years old. Many actors, singers and entertainer read it when they were young. In the edition 2 weeks ago they told about their feelings and mindset as a teenager. The makers of Bravo hope for 50 more years in the future. But in recent years Bravo has got many rivals and the sales figures became worse. In spite of everything Bravo is still the most popular magazine for teenagers and helpless parents.
Danke.
Summary - Correction?
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lintu234
Yesterday I bought the up to date Bravo to make a summary about it. I found many articles about the most popular singers and groups for teenagers. For example the boy group "US5". Many girls love them and now want the boys the boys want to start to conquer the charts of Asia.
In Bravo you can also find much about your body and the life of a teenager. Girls especially can find many articles on how to make themselves look stylish. You can get tipps on where to find the nicest lipstick and how to apply your eyeshadow for get many looks from other girls and handsome boys.
For girls and boys who like posters, Bravo has many posters and pictures in their magazine. You can cut them out and hang them up on the wall in your room. If you have luck maybe your parents will allow you to hang them up all over the house (or flat).
2 weeks ago Bravohad a celebrated it's birthday and became 50 years old. Many actors, singers and entertainer read it when they were young. In the edition 2 weeks ago they told about their feelings and mindset as a teenager. The makers of Bravo hope for 50 more years in the future. But in recent years Bravo has got many rivals and the sales figures became worse. In spite of everything Bravo is still the most popular magazine for teenagers and helpless parents.
Ich bin selbst kein Experte in Englisch, aber ich denke das es sich mit den 2 Ausbesserungen besser anhört....weiß aber nicht ob das jetzt so alles stimmt
In Bravo you can also find much about your body and the life of a teenager. Girls especially can find many articles on how to make themselves look stylish. You can get tipps on where to find the nicest lipstick and how to apply your eyeshadow for get many looks from other girls and handsome boys.
For girls and boys who like posters, Bravo has many posters and pictures in their magazine. You can cut them out and hang them up on the wall in your room. If you have luck maybe your parents will allow you to hang them up all over the house (or flat).
2 weeks ago Bravo
Ich bin selbst kein Experte in Englisch, aber ich denke das es sich mit den 2 Ausbesserungen besser anhört....weiß aber nicht ob das jetzt so alles stimmt
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Greg
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Summary of the latest Bravo issue
Yesterday I bought the current issue of Bravo magazine to write a summary of it. I found many articles on the most popular singers and groups for teenagers. For example the boy group "US5". Many girls love them and the boys now want to start conquering the Asian charts.
In Bravo you can also find a lot of information about your body and the life of teenagers. Especially girls will find many articles on how to make themselves look stylish. You can get tips on where to find the nicest lipstick and how to apply your eyeshadow in order to attract many looks from other girls and handsome boys.
For girls and boys who like posters, Bravo has many posters and pictures in their magazine. You can cut them out and hang them up on the wall in your room. If you are lucky maybe your parents will allow you to hang them up all over the house (or flat).
2 weeks ago Bravo celebrated its 50th anniversary. Many actors, singers and entertainers also used to read it when they were young. In the edition that came out 2 weeks ago they told about their feelings and mindset when they were teenagers. The makers of Bravo hope for 50 more years to come. But in recent years Bravo has got many rivals and the sales figures have dropped. In spite of everything Bravo is still the most popular magazine for teenagers and helpless parents.
Hi,
lass das "you can" ob und zu mal weg. LG
Yesterday I bought the current issue of Bravo magazine to write a summary of it. I found many articles on the most popular singers and groups for teenagers. For example the boy group "US5". Many girls love them and the boys now want to start conquering the Asian charts.
In Bravo you can also find a lot of information about your body and the life of teenagers. Especially girls will find many articles on how to make themselves look stylish. You can get tips on where to find the nicest lipstick and how to apply your eyeshadow in order to attract many looks from other girls and handsome boys.
For girls and boys who like posters, Bravo has many posters and pictures in their magazine. You can cut them out and hang them up on the wall in your room. If you are lucky maybe your parents will allow you to hang them up all over the house (or flat).
2 weeks ago Bravo celebrated its 50th anniversary. Many actors, singers and entertainers also used to read it when they were young. In the edition that came out 2 weeks ago they told about their feelings and mindset when they were teenagers. The makers of Bravo hope for 50 more years to come. But in recent years Bravo has got many rivals and the sales figures have dropped. In spite of everything Bravo is still the most popular magazine for teenagers and helpless parents.
Hi,
lass das "you can" ob und zu mal weg. LG