Geht das so???

[espesse]

Hallo,

ich muss in Englisch ein klein wenig übe mich erzählen. Nun meine Frage ob ich das so lassen kann. Außerdem fehlen mir ein paar Vokabeln. Wäre toll wenn mir jemand helfen könnte.

Ok lets start

Hello my name is Martin. I life in a flat in berlin/spandau. My accommandation is located on the first floor. This house was build in year 1908. It was rekonstruiert in 2004. Before i study, i have learned den Beruf als painter. After that i maked my spezialist a-level. Its my opinion that my timetable is ok. However, the long way to berlin is not very nice, but in these semester its only 2 days per week.
I like it to go in the cinema or meeting with friends, mostly at the weekend. At the evening it like to play football unter der woche

[boert]

Hello my name is Martin. I life in a flat in berlin/spandau. My accommandationwhich is located on the first floor.

This house was built in year 1908. It was rekonstruiertrecapitalized (du meinst "sanieren"?) in 2004. Before I started studying, I(!) have learned den Beruf alswas a painter. After that i makedmade my spezialist(?) a-level. It's my opinion(? "meinst du "I hope"?) that my timetable iswill beok. However, the long way to berlin is not very nice, but in these semester its only 2 days peraweek.
I like it to going into the cinema or meeting with friends, mostly at the weekend. AtIn the evenings during the week I like to play football.

Hinweis: "I" schreibt man im Englischen immer groß.

[Manhattan]

Martin, du hast das allein gemacht? Und dir hat nicht rein zufällig eine Übersetzungmaschine geholfen?

[espesse]

Danke erstmal.

Das traurige daran ist, das ich es alleine gemacht habe. Tja gibts Tipps wie man sein Englisch insbesondere Grammatik auffrischen kann bzw. neu erlernen kann?

MfG

[kleine]

Hello my name is Martin. I life in a flat in berlin/spandau. My accommandationwhich is located on the first floor.

This house was built in year 1908. It was rekonstruiertrecapitalized (du meinst "sanieren"?) in 2004. Before I started studying, I(!) have learned den Beruf alswas a painter. After that i makedmade my spezialist(?) a-level. It's my opinion(? "meinst du "I hope"?) that my timetable iswill beok. However, the long way to berlin is not very nice, but in these semester its only 2 days peraweek.
I like it to going into the cinema or meeting with friends, mostly at the weekend. AtIn the evenings during the week I like to play football.

Hinweis: "I" schreibt man im Englischen immer groß.

One thing! I live in a flat... not I life

Regards
Vera

[espesse]

Wie schauts eigentlich mit diesen Lern CD-Roms aus? Taugen die was? Oder hilft das Allheilmittel, DVDs auf Englisch gucken wirklich so gut???
Texte verstehen, lesen und hören klappt ganz gut. Aber freies schreiben geht gar ned . Mach mir da ein wenig sorgen zwecks Studium

[kleine]

Hallo,

ich muss in Englisch ein klein wenig übe mich erzählen. Nun meine Frage ob ich das so lassen kann. Außerdem fehlen mir ein paar Vokabeln. Wäre toll wenn mir jemand helfen könnte.

Ok lets start

Hello my name is Martin. I live in a flat in berlin/spandau which is located on the first floor. This house was build in 1908. It was reconstructed in 2004. Before I studied I made an appranticeship as a painter. After that I did my a-level. However, the long way to berlin is not very nice,???? but this semester it's only twice a week.
I like going to the cinema or meeting friends, mostly on the weekends. In the evening I like playing football.