I need Help, please?
Ich musste ein Interview verfassen und einen Text. Könnte bitte jemand das prüfen und mich auf meine Fehler aufmerksam machen. I danke im voraus.
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Me: Where do you live?
George: I live with my father in Survey.
Me: Are you married?
George: No. I’m bachelor.
Me: What is your biggest dream or desire?
George: I want to get to know wonderful places in the world. A little while ago. Some friends invited me to make a five-year voyage in a sailing boat. But I’m not sure if I really want to go.
Me: Why not? It is a good opportunity to see many beautiful places over the world.
George: Yes, I know. But my father and me are living together in a house. He is 76 years old. If I decide to make this trip I must sell my house and it would be enough to bring my Dad in a comfortable old people’s home for 5 years.
Me: You have planed everything very well. What keep you back?
George: Since I was a child I never leave my Dad. I can’t desert him now. He needs me more than ever before. That’s why I can’t make my decision?
Me: What will you do now? How much time you have until you have to your decision?
George: Not so much. I would like to have some more time, but I don’t think that my friends give me more time to solve my problem and I am not sure if I ever find a solution. I see no way out. I have always dreamed about this chance to get to know all the beautiful places in the world.
Me: Thank you for this interview and I hope that everything will be fine in your life and your dream fulfil.
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When I immigrate to another country to start a new life I would miss mother and father because they always support me in my life and in my decision. Then I would miss all my friends, especially Justina and Olga. We know us for a very long time. We spend a lot of time together. We can talk about everything and have always fun with them. We go dancing and soon.
Of course I would miss my flat, bed, my books and CDs.
I would not immigrate alone. I have a daughter. I would take her with me. She is my sunshine. But I would be also glad to leave all the problems behind me and to start a new life in another country. I love challenges. I like to meet new peoples.
I would not miss my surroundings and my job. I don’t like my job. It is very boring and I don’t like my boss.
I need help, please
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Me: Where do you live?
George: I live with my father in Survey.
Me: Are you married?
George: No. I’m bachelor.(single?)
Me: What is your biggest dream or desire?
George: I want to get to know wonderful places in the world. Alittle while ago, some friends invited me to make a five-year voyage ion a sailing boat. But I’m not sure if I really want to go.
Me: Why not? It is a good opportunity to see many beautiful places all over the world.
George: Yes, I know. But my father and me are living together in a house. He is 76 years old. If I decide to make this trip I must sell my house and it would be enough to bring my Dad in a comfortable old people’s home for 5 years.
Me: You have planed everything very well. What keeps you back?
George: Since I was a child I neverleaveleft my Dad (alone). I can’t desert him now. He needs me more than ever before. That’s why I can’t make my decision
Me: What will you do now? How much time you have until you have to make your decision?
George: Not so much. I would like to have some more time, but I don’t think that my friends give me more time to solve my problem and I am not sure if I will ever find a solution. I see no way out. I have always dreamed about this chance: to get to know all the beautiful places in the world.
Me: Thank you for this interview and I hope that everything will be fine in your life and your dream will come true.
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When I would immigrate to another country to start a new life I would miss my mother and father because they always support me in my life and in my decisions. Then I would miss all my friends, especially Justina and Olga. We know us for a very long time. We spend a lot of time together. We can talk about everything and I always have fun with them. We go dancing and so on.
Of course I would miss my flat, bed, my books and CDs.
I would not immigrate alone. I have a daughter. I would take her with me. She is my sunshine. But I would also be glad to leave all the problems behindme and to start a new life in another country. I love challenges. I like to meet new peoples.
I would not miss my surroundings and my job. I don’t like my job. It is very boring and I don’t like my boss.
George: I live with my father in Survey.
Me: Are you married?
George: No. I’m bachelor.(single?)
Me: What is your biggest dream or desire?
George: I want to get to know wonderful places in the world. A
Me: Why not? It is a good opportunity to see many beautiful places all over the world.
George: Yes, I know. But my father and me are living together in a house. He is 76 years old. If I decide to make this trip I must sell my house and it would be enough to bring my Dad in a comfortable old people’s home for 5 years.
Me: You have planed everything very well. What keeps you back?
George: Since I was a child I never
Me: What will you do now? How much time you have until you have to make your decision?
George: Not so much. I would like to have some more time, but I don’t think that my friends give me more time to solve my problem and I am not sure if I will ever find a solution. I see no way out. I have always dreamed about this chance: to get to know all the beautiful places in the world.
Me: Thank you for this interview and I hope that everything will be fine in your life and your dream will come true.
4
When I would immigrate to another country to start a new life I would miss my mother and father because they always support me in my life and in my decisions. Then I would miss all my friends, especially Justina and Olga. We know us for a very long time. We spend a lot of time together. We can talk about everything and I always have fun with them. We go dancing and so on.
Of course I would miss my flat, bed, my books and CDs.
I would not immigrate alone. I have a daughter. I would take her with me. She is my sunshine. But I would also be glad to leave all the problems behind
I would not miss my surroundings and my job. I don’t like my job. It is very boring and I don’t like my boss.