Englisch: Kleiner Text zum korrigieren

[Knortzsch]

Huhu,

hatte in Englisch als Haufaufgabe auf ein paar Grundsätze der Declaration of Independence in eigenen Worten aufzuschreiben. (Quelle war ein ausgeteilter kleiner Text)

Würde mich freuen, wenn ihr mal drüber lesen könntet.

The Declaration of Independence

The Declaration says that everybody have to follow and respect the Laws of Nature and of Nature's God. Additionally it says that all human beings are equally and that they got their rights by God to live a life in freedom and happiness. To secure these rights human beings create Governments, which have to observe these rights. When they don't follow these aimes of equality, freedom and happiness human beings are allow to change the Governments or to create new ones.

Wenn noch etwas gravierendes fehlt, könnt ihr es ja posten.

Knortzschi

[boert]

The Declaration of Independence

The Declaration says that everybody haves to follow and respect the Laws of Nature and of Nature's God. Additionally it says that all human beings are equally and that they got their rights by God to live a life in freedom and happiness. To secure these rights human beings create Governments, which have to observe these rights. When they don't follow these aimes of equality, freedom and happiness human beings are allowed to change the Governments or to create new ones.


Und Stichwort Groß/Kleinschreibung *wink mit dem Zaunpfahl*

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[....]When they don't follow these aims of equality, fre[...]

nur mal den fehler korrigiert beim schnellen drüberlesen