hallo,
kann mir bitte einer diesen text grammatikalisch richtig korrigieren. mein englisch ist leider nicht so gut. wäre euch sehr dankbar!
Its time for liberation no need for suffer anymore,
lets break those rules we want no fight,
free your own be your self no one can stop us now,
kids are subject to strict regulations, they have no educations,
dont let us wait so long its an urgent emergency,
so politicions hurry up, befor it is too late,
fancy that, all the people live in harmony and peace,
shake there hands smoke some pot and smile like a little child,
thought there's no cure for that, they wanna bring us down, down on the ground
governments, headmans, leaders please do a favor for me, keep the conditions in position,
you must admit , we have a point, that we adamantly defend you have to respect.
mfgchris
hi, bitte um eure hilfe...help..:)
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discipulusrob
Well, let´s have a try..!
Its time for liberation, no need for suffer ((-ing), besser: to suffer) anymore,
lets break those rules we want no fight,
free your own be your self (yourself), no one can stop us now,
kids are subject to strict regulations, they have no educations,
dont let us wait so long its an urgent emergency,
so politicions (politicians) hurry up, befor(-e) it is too late,
fancy that, all the people live in harmony and peace,
shake there (their) hands, smoke some pot and smile like a little child,
thought there's no cure for that, they wanna bring us down, down on the ground(.)
governments, headmans, leaders(:) please do a favor (favor=AmericanEnglish; favour=BritishEnglish) to me ("do me a favour" oder "do a favour to me"), keep the conditions in position,
you must admit , we have a point, that we adamantly defend, you have to respect.
That´s it!
See you...discip
Its time for liberation, no need for suffer ((-ing), besser: to suffer) anymore,
lets break those rules we want no fight,
free your own be your self (yourself), no one can stop us now,
kids are subject to strict regulations, they have no educations,
dont let us wait so long its an urgent emergency,
so politicions (politicians) hurry up, befor(-e) it is too late,
fancy that, all the people live in harmony and peace,
shake there (their) hands, smoke some pot and smile like a little child,
thought there's no cure for that, they wanna bring us down, down on the ground(.)
governments, headmans, leaders(:) please do a favor (favor=AmericanEnglish; favour=BritishEnglish) to me ("do me a favour" oder "do a favour to me"), keep the conditions in position,
you must admit , we have a point, that we adamantly defend, you have to respect.
That´s it!
See you...discip
