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Am vergangenem Sonntag fuhren wir auf dem Donauradweg 125 Kilometer. Es hat uns sehr viel Spass gemacht. 12 Kilometer geht es nur durch den Wald, das ist angenehm zu fahren. Es waren viele Radler unterwegs, trotz der großen Hitze. Aber auf dem Bike weht immer ein Wind. Am Nachmittag ist es heiß geworden, aber wir waren schon auf dem Rückweg. Mit einigen Pausen waren wir am Abend zu Hause. Es war ein schöner Radausflug, den wir öfters fahren werden.
On the last Sunday we went on the Danube cycle track 125 kilometre. It has done a lot of fun to us. 12 Kilometre it goes only by the wood, this is pleasant to go. There were on the move many cyclists, in spite of the big heat. But on the bike a wind always blows. In the afternoon it has become hot, but we already were on the way back. With some breaks we were in the evening at home. It was a nice bicycle excursion, which we will drive on occasion.
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On last Sunday we drove about 125 kilometres on the Danube cycle track.
It was a lot of fun (for us.)
The track goes 12 kilometres through the woods only, which is comfortable to drive.
There were many cyclists on the move (or "en-route"), in despite of the big heat.
But on the bike always a wind blows.
In the afternoon it was getting hot, but we were already on the way back.
With some breaks we reached our home in the evening.
It was a nice bicycle excursion (which) we will rerun more often.
It was a lot of fun (for us.)
The track goes 12 kilometres through the woods only, which is comfortable to drive.
There were many cyclists on the move (or "en-route"), in despite of the big heat.
But on the bike always a wind blows.
In the afternoon it was getting hot, but we were already on the way back.
With some breaks we reached our home in the evening.
It was a nice bicycle excursion (which) we will rerun more often.
-
rgriscom
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Last Sunday we rode about 125 kilometres on the Danube cycle track.
It was a lot of fun (for us.)
The track goes 12 kilometers through the woods, and it is a comfortable ride.
There were many cyclists on the move (or "en-route"), despite the big heat.
But on the bike there is always a wind blowing.
In the afternoon it was getting hot, but we were already on the way back.
(Even) With some breaks we reached our home in the evening.
It was a nice bicycle excursion which we will rerun more often.
-rgriscom
Last Sunday we rode about 125 kilometres on the Danube cycle track.
It was a lot of fun (for us.)
The track goes 12 kilometers through the woods, and it is a comfortable ride.
There were many cyclists on the move (or "en-route"), despite the big heat.
But on the bike there is always a wind blowing.
In the afternoon it was getting hot, but we were already on the way back.
(Even) With some breaks we reached our home in the evening.
It was a nice bicycle excursion which we will rerun more often.
-rgriscom