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serta wenecker

Kurzer Bewerbungstext------Eure Expertenmeinung

Beitrag von serta wenecker »

HI,
soweit vielen Dank für eure Hilfe bis hierhin.
Falls ihr Lust habt kuckt doch mal drüber.
Alles ziemlich informell, also nicht wundern.
Ich würde folgendes gerne als Antwort schicken.

"Dear xyz xyz,

I was very happy to get a positive answer of you. To come to London for interviews in advance is no problem at all.
All the finished projects and the ones in progress as well are very interesting to me because I like the way and styles these projects are presented and done.
So I`d be very glad working for you.
For the last few days I checked the prices of living, transport and the other expenses.

With little surprise I realized that London is quite expensive.
To be realistic I think I need to have £ xyz per month.

About the timetable: I have to be back in Germany in mid-October and I could start around the 20th of July. A few more days is no problem, maybe I can do some arrangements with the professors of the Master Studies.
There is one more question.
Which kind of software do you use in your office? (in CAD, pics, rendering)
I´d be very lucky hearing of you.

Kind regards"
In jedem Falle vielen Dank.
Serta

Fürs Verständniss vielleicht noch die mail die ich vorher bekommen hatte.

Dear Serta


We recently received your card in the post and thought your work was of great interest, but we have some questions.


Have we understood correctly that you are only looking for a summer position or would you possibly be staying for longer?
This may seem a little up front but do you have any idea of what you would want to be paid?
Are you intending to come to London for interviews in advance of the summer?




We look forward to hearing from you.


Kind regards

boert

Beitrag von boert »

"Dear xyz xyz,

I was very happy to get a positive answer of(from/or simply: "to get a positive feedback/answer)" answer you. To come (Coming?/Travelling?/Going?) to London for interviews in advance(?)(/would'nt be a problem) is no problem at all.
All the finished projects and the ones in progress as well are very interesting to me because I like the way and styles these projects are presented and done.
So I`d be very glad working for you.
For the last few days I checked the prices (costs) of living, transport and the other expenses.

With little surprise I realized that London is quite expensive.
To be realistic I think I need to have £ xyz per month.

About the timetable: I have to be back in Germany in mid-October and I could start around the 20th of July. A few more days is (would'nt be (a big)) no problem, maybe I can do some arrangements with the professors of the Master Studies.
There is one more question:
Which (What) kind of software do you use in your office? (in CAD, pics, rendering)
I´d be very lucky hearing of you.
(I'd appreciate it to get a feedback/answer/hear from you)
Kind regards

boert

Beitrag von boert »

Mmmhh, die letzten Sätze sind immer die schwersten :mrgreen:

Wahrscheinlich hast du das bei mir gesehen, hat sich irgendwie eingeprägt.
Wenn du mir ne Alternative gibst werde ich die Floskel aus meinem Sprachgebrauch entfernen. Restlos. :wink: