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Write a short text about what they plan to do on holiday. Start like this...
First, theyre flying to Delhi. In Delhi, theyre staying at... and doing...
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Der Mum,
just a quick not to let you know where when Tom and I will be on holiday. On Saturday 6th March we fly out to Delhi. The flight leaves Heatrow at 10.20 and well need to be there at least an hour before that, so were leaving the house at about 8.30. Were spending the first few days Delhi, where were staying at the Diplomat Hotel. Were going to do some sightseeing there and get used to climate. Then were travelling around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds really great a bite like an Indian version of the Orient Express. Im really looking forward to it. The train starts form Delhi on Wednesday evening. We meet at half past seven for dinner, and train leavies at 22.45. Were going to jalpur first, then on to six or seven other places, where we can go sightseeing during the day. Every evening we meet again at the station, and the train travels trought the night while we are asleep. On the way back we are spending a day in Angra, to see the Taj mahal. We arrive in Dehi again on the following Wednesday morning at 7.30. Then were spending a couple of days in Dehi, sightseeing and relaxing. On Friday morning we fly from Dehi to Goa via mumbal. In Goa were staying in Hotel Silver Sands, and were going tp spend a few days at the beach. On Tuesday we fly back up to Mumbal, where we are spending the lasr few day our holiday at the Palace Hotel. Our flight back to heathrow leaves Mimbal at 9.00 on saturday morning. Im picking up our tickets on Friday, so Ill phone you with the flight details an dhotel telephone numbers then.
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kleine
Dear Mum,
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and I will be on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we fly out to Delhi. The plane leaves Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we'll need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're going to leave the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). We'll spend the first few days in Delhi, where we'll stay at the Diplomat Hotel. We're going to do some sightseeing there and get used to the climate. Then we'll travell around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds really great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. Im really looking forward to it. The train starts form Delhi on Wednesday evening. We meet at half past seven for dinner, and the train leaves at 22.45 (am or pm).
I'll check the rest later got to go now.
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and I will be on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we fly out to Delhi. The plane leaves Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we'll need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're going to leave the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). We'll spend the first few days in Delhi, where we'll stay at the Diplomat Hotel. We're going to do some sightseeing there and get used to the climate. Then we'll travell around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds really great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. Im really looking forward to it. The train starts form Delhi on Wednesday evening. We meet at half past seven for dinner, and the train leaves at 22.45 (am or pm).
I'll check the rest later got to go now.
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Gast
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kleine
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kleine
Dear Mum,
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and I will be on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we are going to fly to Delhi. The plane leaves Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're going to leave the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). First we are going to spend a few days in Delhi, where we're going to stay at the Diplomat Hotel. There we're going to do some sightseeing and get used to the climate. Afterwards we are going to travell around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. I'm really looking forward to it. The train is supposed to leave Delhi on Wednesday evening. We'll meet for dinner at half past seven, and the train will leave at 22.45 (am or pm). First we are going to Jalpur then we are going to six or seven other places where we can go and do some sightseeing during the day. Every evening we'll meet at the station again, and the train will drive at night while we are asleep. On the way back we'll spend a day in Angra to see the Taj mahal. We'll arrive in Dehi on the following Wednesday morning at 7.30 again. We'll spend a couple of days in Dehi to do some sightseeing and relaxing. On Friday morning we'll fly from Dehi to Goa via mumbal. In Goa we'll stay in a Hotel called Silver Sands, and we are going to spend a few days at the beach. On Tuesday we'll fly back to Mumbal, where we'll spend the last few days of our holiday at the Palace Hotel. Our flight back to heathrow is going to depart in Mimbal at 9.00 on saturday morning. I'll pick up our tickets on Friday, then I'll phone you with the flight details and hotel telephone numbers.
Greetings
Kleine
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and I will be on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we are going to fly to Delhi. The plane leaves Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're going to leave the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). First we are going to spend a few days in Delhi, where we're going to stay at the Diplomat Hotel. There we're going to do some sightseeing and get used to the climate. Afterwards we are going to travell around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. I'm really looking forward to it. The train is supposed to leave Delhi on Wednesday evening. We'll meet for dinner at half past seven, and the train will leave at 22.45 (am or pm). First we are going to Jalpur then we are going to six or seven other places where we can go and do some sightseeing during the day. Every evening we'll meet at the station again, and the train will drive at night while we are asleep. On the way back we'll spend a day in Angra to see the Taj mahal. We'll arrive in Dehi on the following Wednesday morning at 7.30 again. We'll spend a couple of days in Dehi to do some sightseeing and relaxing. On Friday morning we'll fly from Dehi to Goa via mumbal. In Goa we'll stay in a Hotel called Silver Sands, and we are going to spend a few days at the beach. On Tuesday we'll fly back to Mumbal, where we'll spend the last few days of our holiday at the Palace Hotel. Our flight back to heathrow is going to depart in Mimbal at 9.00 on saturday morning. I'll pick up our tickets on Friday, then I'll phone you with the flight details and hotel telephone numbers.
Greetings
Kleine
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Gast
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kleine
HIHI kann passieren...Aber kannst du ihr vielleicht weiterhelfen, da sie mir gerade eine pm geschrieben hat, dass sie das wohl im Present Progressive machen muss und ich ja alles in der Zukunft geschrieben habe...Na ja find ich auch komisch, da sich das ja auch eigentlich in der Zukunft abspielt...Und ich bin jetzt wirklich zu faul das ganze noch mal zu machen 
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Gast
ich versuche mir gerade darüber klar zu werden, ob das ganze jetzt ins Futur gesetzt werden soll oder ins Present Progressive, wobei das meiner ansicht wenig Sinn macht, zumal ihre ausgearbeitete Version ja auch Futur steht.
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@audi100000: Es währe vielleicht sinnvoll wenn du mal ganz genau sagen würdest was du jetzt genau machen musst
schaut mir aber nicht nach Futur ausstart like this:
First, theyre flying to Delhi. In Delhi, theyre staying at... and doing...
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@audi100000: Es währe vielleicht sinnvoll wenn du mal ganz genau sagen würdest was du jetzt genau machen musst
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sweety-deluxe
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sweety-deluxe
Dear Mum,
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and I will be on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we are flying to Delhi. The plane is leaving Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're leaving the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). First we are spending a few days in Delhi, where we're gstaying at the Diplomat Hotel. There we're doing some sightseeing and get used to the climate. Afterwards we are traveling around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. I'm really looking forward to it. The train is probably leaving Delhi on Wednesday evening. We are meeting for dinner at half past seven, and the train is leaving at 22.45 (am or pm). First we are going to Jalpur then we are going to six or seven other places where we can go and do some sightseeing during the day. Every evening we are meeting at the station again, and the train is driving at night while we are asleep. On the way back we are spending a day in Angra to see the Taj mahal. We are arriving in Dehi on the following Wednesday morning at 7.30 again. We are spending a couple of days in Dehi to do some sightseeing and relaxing. On Friday morning we are flying from Dehi to Goa via mumbal. In Goa we are staying in a Hotel called Silver Sands, and we are spending a few days at the beach. On Tuesday we are flying back to Mumbal, where we are spending the last few days of our holiday at the Palace Hotel. Our flight back to heathrow is departing in Mimbal at 9.00 on saturday morning. I'm picking up our tickets on Friday, then I'm phoning you with the flight details and hotel telephone numbers.
ich hab jetz ma alles in present progressive gesetzt
jassi
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and I will be on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we are flying to Delhi. The plane is leaving Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're leaving the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). First we are spending a few days in Delhi, where we're gstaying at the Diplomat Hotel. There we're doing some sightseeing and get used to the climate. Afterwards we are traveling around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. I'm really looking forward to it. The train is probably leaving Delhi on Wednesday evening. We are meeting for dinner at half past seven, and the train is leaving at 22.45 (am or pm). First we are going to Jalpur then we are going to six or seven other places where we can go and do some sightseeing during the day. Every evening we are meeting at the station again, and the train is driving at night while we are asleep. On the way back we are spending a day in Angra to see the Taj mahal. We are arriving in Dehi on the following Wednesday morning at 7.30 again. We are spending a couple of days in Dehi to do some sightseeing and relaxing. On Friday morning we are flying from Dehi to Goa via mumbal. In Goa we are staying in a Hotel called Silver Sands, and we are spending a few days at the beach. On Tuesday we are flying back to Mumbal, where we are spending the last few days of our holiday at the Palace Hotel. Our flight back to heathrow is departing in Mimbal at 9.00 on saturday morning. I'm picking up our tickets on Friday, then I'm phoning you with the flight details and hotel telephone numbers.
ich hab jetz ma alles in present progressive gesetzt
jassi
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Gast
here we go:
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and are going on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we are flyingg to Delhi. The plane is leaving Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're leaving the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). First we are going to spend a few days in Delhi, where we're staying at the Diplomat Hotel. There we're doing some sightseeing and we are getting (?) used to the climate. Afterwards we are travelling around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. I'm really looking forward to it. The train is supposed to leave Delhi on Wednesday evening. We are meeting for dinner at half past seven, and the train is leaving at 22.45 (am or pm). First we are going to Jalpur then we are going to six or seven other places where we can go and we are doing some sightseeing during the day. Every evening we are meeting at the station again, and the train is driving at night while we are asleep. On the way back we are spending a day in Angra to see the Taj mahal. We are arriving in Dehi on the following Wednesday morning at 7.30 again. We are spending a couple of days in Dehi to do some sightseeing and relaxing. On Friday morning we are flying from Dehi to Goa via mumbal. In Goa we are staying in a Hotel called Silver Sands, and we are going to spend a few days at the beach. On Tuesday we are flying back to Mumbal, where we are spending the last few days of our holiday at the Palace Hotel. Our flight back to heathrow is going to depart in Mimbal at 9.00 on saturday morning. I am picking up our tickets on Friday, then I am phoning you with the flight details and hotel telephone numbers.
Just a quick note to let you know where Tom and are going on holiday. On Saturday 6th of March we are flyingg to Delhi. The plane is leaving Heatrow at 10.20 (am or pm?) and we need to be there at least an hour before departure, so we're leaving the house at about 8.30 (am or pm). First we are going to spend a few days in Delhi, where we're staying at the Diplomat Hotel. There we're doing some sightseeing and we are getting (?) used to the climate. Afterwards we are travelling around Rajasthan by train for a week. The train is called the Palace on Wheels - It sounds great a bit like an Indian version of the Orient Express. I'm really looking forward to it. The train is supposed to leave Delhi on Wednesday evening. We are meeting for dinner at half past seven, and the train is leaving at 22.45 (am or pm). First we are going to Jalpur then we are going to six or seven other places where we can go and we are doing some sightseeing during the day. Every evening we are meeting at the station again, and the train is driving at night while we are asleep. On the way back we are spending a day in Angra to see the Taj mahal. We are arriving in Dehi on the following Wednesday morning at 7.30 again. We are spending a couple of days in Dehi to do some sightseeing and relaxing. On Friday morning we are flying from Dehi to Goa via mumbal. In Goa we are staying in a Hotel called Silver Sands, and we are going to spend a few days at the beach. On Tuesday we are flying back to Mumbal, where we are spending the last few days of our holiday at the Palace Hotel. Our flight back to heathrow is going to depart in Mimbal at 9.00 on saturday morning. I am picking up our tickets on Friday, then I am phoning you with the flight details and hotel telephone numbers.
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Gast
