Dialog bitte Verbesserung

[Buffy666]

Hallo, hatte als Hausübung einen Dialog über die Buchung von Ferien zu schreiben.
Wäre nett, wenn sich den jemand durchlesen und etwas verbessern könnte.
Danke im Voraus.

Booking a room dialogue

A: Hello
B: Hello. What can I do for you?
A: I saw your offer on your homepage, a holiday on the island Bermuda.
B: Yes, for a week it costs 600 €.
A: Yes, so I want to book a twin bedded room with a balcony and a view at the sea. The room should be one of the top floors. The room should include a shower and a toilette.
B: Sure. Where should the hotel be?
A: The hotel should be close to the beach.
B: Yes.
A: Are there any sights or shopping centres near the hotel?
B: Yes, you can take a bus and travel downtown. There you will have many shopping centres and some old buildings. More information you will get on our homepage if you will look at it once again.
A: Thanks. Which sports are offered?
B: We have a fitness centre in the hotel and close to the hotel is a swimming pool. Near the beach you can play beach volleyball and there is also a little golf court and a tennis court. You can take part at biking tours. You can rent the mountain bikes for some days.
A: That’s good. I hope in the hotel will be a quiet atmosphere because I want to relax. Are there any wellness offers?
B: In the hotel it is very quiet and everybody is very friendly. In the hotel there is a sauna but you must pay for it extra and there are also massage and relaxation offers.
A: That’s fine. What does the price include?
B: The price includes the pickup from the airport with a bus, the breakfast and lunch, the room and the bus downtown. So you can go shopping whenever you want. You will have two dining areas, a lounge, a little disco close to the hotel and some restaurants. At the evening you can do some barbecue with your friends at the beach and on Friday there is a big beach party.
A: When will the bus pick me up?
B: It depends when you will arrive.
A: I will arrive at 16:30 at the Bermuda airport.
B: OK.
A: Do you offer a price reduction if I will book immediately?
B: No, I am sorry but it is anyway very cheap.
A: OK. I will book this holiday.
B: Thanks. See you soon. Good bye.
A: Goodbye.

[boert]

Booking a room dialogue

A: Hello
B: Hi. What can I do for you?
A: I saw that offer on your homepage, a holiday on the Bermuda island.
B: Yes, it will be 600 € for a week.
A: So I want a twin bedded room with a balcony and a view at the sea (<-- Soll das Hotelzimmer am Meer gelegen sein oder hättest du gerne Sicht aufs Meer?). It would be nice if the room is one of the top floors and includes a shower and a toilette.
B: Sure. Where should the hotel be?
A: Close to the beach would be nice.
B: Okay.
A: Are there any sights or shopping centres near the hotel?
B: Yes, you can take a bus and travel downtown. There are many shopping centres and some old buildings. For more information visit our homepage please.
A: Thanks. Which sports are offered?
B: There is a fitness centre in the hotel and close to the hotel is a swimming pool. You can play volleyball on the beach and there is also a little golf- and a tennis court. You can attend to biking tours or rent mountain bikes for some days.
A: That sounds good. I hope the hotel is secluded because I want to relax. Are there any wellness offers?
B: In the hotel it is very quiet and everybody is very friendly. There is a sauna but it is not included and also massage and relaxation offers.
A: That’s fine. What does the price include?
B: It includes the transfer from the airport with a bus, the breakfast and lunch, the room and the bus transfer downtown. So you can go shopping whenever you want. There are two dining areas, a lounge, a little disco close to the hotel and some restaurants. At the evening you can have some barbecue with your friends at the beach and on Fridays there is a big beach party.
A: When will the bus pick me up?
B: That depends on your arrival time.
A: I will arrive at 16:30 at the Bermuda airport.
B: The bus will be waiting there for you.
A: Do you offer a price reduction if I book immediately?
B: No, I am sorry but it is a very cheap offer anyway.
A: OK. I'll take it.
B: Thanks. Have fun. Good bye.
A: Goodbye.

[Buffy666]

Danke . Sehr lieb von dir. Das Zimmer soll eine Aussicht aufs Meer haben.