Die hier habe ich für einen ausm English Grundkurs im 13. Jahrgang geschrieben und er hat nette 14 Pkt dafür kassiert.
Mich interessiert nun was ihr von der Geschichte haltet. Ich kann ja schlecht zu seiner Lehrerin gehen
Danke fürs Feedback.PS: Ist vielleicht etwas lang...
My birthday in the year 2163
Maybe you would expect someone to send you some greetings because it is your birthday but I don't. What's the point of celebrating your birthday if you were never born. I envy those who were born. Everyone of them should think of it and be happy that he had a childhood and experienced such lovely things like the first bike, the first day in school, the first love...I've never been to school, but I'm a teacher. I've never ridden a bike but I know how to do it. I've never fallen in love and still I don't know what it feels like. I guess I won't ever know because it's too late now. I won't go further into it now in order not to confuse you. First I have to tell you my story to make you able to understand the whole of it.
30 years ago I woke up and couldn't remember anything. I tried to concentrate but there was nothing. I didn't notice that some strange people were watching me. I took a look at where I am and there I was, in some kind of laboratory, naked and a dozen people staring at me. They turned out to be doctors. One of them came closer and wanted to know if I was alright. Well I've been alright but I wasn't able to remember anything. Not a single thing. I didn't know who I am or where I am from. It was like my brain had just started to work and in the end I recognzied that it was right.
They told me that somebody had found me in the forests and that I should be thankful that I was still alive. They said that I got amnesia and that my memories will come back. Maybe in the next few minutes but it's also possible that I won't remeber anything of my past for the next few years. They told me who I am and that I am a teacher. I'm teaching English in Boras in Sweden and I'm not married. They couldn't find any relative either. It was a kind of depressing but I kept hoping that I'll be able to remeber someone one day. This never happened because there is nobody to remember. Now I've been working for 30 years as a teacher and almost every day I tried to find a hint which may lead me to my past but I failed. I never found anything but information which I already received at the hospital and at work. I am teacher, teaching English in Boras since 2160. I've never been married and I'm a loner. No friends, no relatives, not even a pet! They could have at least given me a dog or something...
I don't want to make you wait any longer. I've never been born because they created me. I'm not a machine but I'm not human either. I'm just an experiment of the human race. They took some elements, put them together, made me look like a man and gave me a chip which works like a brain. Then they released me and prepared everything to make me believe that they were doctors and that I was found in the forests and of course that I have amnesia.
Noone of us is supposed to find this out but I am pretty old now and there is no money to feed retired experiments like me. That's why they told me the truth. I was looking forward to my retirement and now I know that I won't ever experience it. There was a lack of English teachers in Sweden and then they just made some new ones. Now I'm not able to go on with work any longer and they don't have any further use for me so they plan to shut down the chip which works in my head to put it in another new created body. Without this chip my own body doesn't work. It will be waste and disposed like some other biological waste. They will install this chip in a new body and tell him the same story which they told me. I've never been thinking about a rebirth but this seems to be a very sarcastic way of it. This new experiment will get the same information I got and he will react the same way I did. He will be teacher in Boras and stay alone until his very last day. And then he will get to know everything I just told you. Now tell me. Am I going to die? If I was human I would be able to die, but am I? Or am I a machine? Then I can't die. It's called shut down when you talk of machines. The last possibility is to regard me as an experiment. Then I'm not going to die and not going to be shut down either. As long as they keep producing us the experiment which I am a part of won't die and as long as this experiment is alive nothing dies or is shut down. That's also the way the law looks at it. I am not going to die. I'm just going to be recycled like some can or something. Of course there are demonstrators trying to change the governments mind but they are getting fewer and fewer. More and more people get used to it and that's why you won't ever hear anything of me again. It is a kind of depressing but there is no way to escape. They can locate me because of this chip in my head. The only way would be suicide but how to kill me if I can't die.......
) Would you install on an old Amiga-computer actual software like "Windows XP"? No, you won't. It won't work - or there would be a lot of complications... 
looking for the right word - I Don't even know it in German 
] let's say to make your story looking like being unbelivable - or my argumentation is just going too much in detail;
- this "recycling"-point does not really match together.