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Hallo Leute

Ich bräuchte wieder einmal eure Hilfe. Ich muss einen Text zu folgender Aufgabenstellung schreiben.

Is TV a good thing or a bad thing? Describe and explain your personal opinions about television.

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Personally I think TV is very important as a way of getting information. I like newa because when there is a catastrophe somewhere in the world, it helps to see pictures, which show the full reality of the situation.
I can't say TV is a good thing or a bad thing because there are many advantages and disadvantages and TV is the most important medium today. In the different TV channel one's can experience about politics, economy and sport. A lot of regional TV channel report on events from the differents regions. Some TV programmes can stimulate people to be creative and do things with other people. They can learn about a new hobby or other things.
Everyone can improve one's mind but one's must see differents programmes because the different channel answer for differents opinion. I do like to see films of music events or sport events. I don't have to put on any special clothes and I can watch what I want. First of all I don't have to sit in the same seat all the time, either. I enjoy watching wildlife programmes and reports about strange countries and strange cultures. I like this reportages. And I like reportages about families with a lot of children and their life or people, who are building a house or renovate it.
But TV watching has some disadvantages. I don't like soap operas tough. I am of the opinion that soap operas are give little room for individual imagination. The action and the stories nearly are all the same. Every channel has his own soap opera. There is not real live. I hate violence and hooror movies on TV either. The fact is that these movies are harmful to children. Some channel has in the afternoon cartoons with much violence. That is why I always watch TV together with my children. First we select the program and then we watch TV. After that we speak about the program. Sometimes the children don't understand something and then they ask me.
Some parents using the TV as a babysitter. Is bad for children to watch many TV. Some children don't learn exactly speaking but sometimes the parents are the best example for their children. They have the TV on the whole evening.


Ich weiss der Text ist etwas lang, ich hoffe aber ihr könnt mir trotzdem helfen.

Tschüß Antje

raincat

Beitrag von raincat »

Hallo, Antje,

ich hab ein bissl was verbessert/geändert, es aber nicht markiert ... war mir einfach zu ville Arbeit. Du merkst es ja beim Durchlesen ... :)

Personally, I think TV is very important as a way of getting information. I like news because when there is a catastrophe somewhere in the world it helps to see pictures, which show the full reality of the situation.

I can't say TV is a good thing or a bad thing because there are many advantages and disadvantages and TV is the most important medium today. In the different TV channels one can experience about politics, economy and sport. A lot of regional TV channels report on events from the different regions. Some TV programmes can stimulate people to be creative and do things together with other people. They can learn something about a new hobby or other things.

Everybody can get wiser by watching TV but one has to see several programmes because different channels offer different opinions. (Ich hoffe, das ist, was Du meinst ...) I like to see films of music events or sport events. I don't have to put on any special clothes and I can watch what I want. Besides I don't have to sit in the same seat all the time. I enjoy watching wildlife programmes and reports about foreign countries and foreign cultures. I like these reportages. And I like reportages about families with a lot of children and their life or people, who are building a house or renovate it.

But watching TV has some disadvantages, too. I don't like soap operas. (tough? Was meinst Du damit?). In my opinion soap operas give little room only for individual imagination. Action and stories are nearly all the same. Every channel has an own soap opera. It’s not real live. Besides I hate violence and horror movies on TV. It is a fact that these movies are harmful to children. Some channels show cartoons with much violence in the afternoon. That is why I always watch TV together with my children. First we select the program and then we watch TV. After that we speak about the program. Sometimes the children don't understand something and then they ask me.

Some parents use the TV as a babysitter. It is bad for children to watch much TV. Some children don't learn to speak exactly but sometimes the parents are the best example for their children. They watch TV all the evening.

Zuckerschnecke1004

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Hallo raincat

Vielen Dank für deine Mühe.

Tschüß Antje

raincat

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You're welcome! :)