Kann jemand den Text korrigieren?
Thx!
The goods were made by hand change into goods were made by machines. Building factories and installing new machines, especially in the North of England, cut the number of workers. The fuel wood changed into coal, England became the biggest iron producer in Europe. Making goods by machines, is the reason, people moved from the country to the big cities. The way of transport turned into canals, linking towns all over Britain. Another new way of transport is the railway, invented in cooperation with the steam engine, soon became a symbol of the Industrial Revolution.
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Desp
Brauche schnelle Hilfe!!
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Desperado
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raincat
Re: Brauche schnelle Hilfe!!
The goods made by hand change(d) into goods made by machines. Building of factories and installing of new machines, especially in the North of England, cut the number of workers. Fuel wood changed into coal, England became the biggest iron producer in Europe. Making goods by machines, is (was) the reason that people moved from the countryside to the big cities. The way of transport turned into canals, linking towns all over (Great?) Britain. Another new way of transport is (was?) the railway, invented in cooperation with the steam engine, which became a symbol of the Industrial Revolution soon.
Hi, Desperado,
hab einiges verändert und hoffe, es ist so ok. Evtl. schaut hier nochmal ein Muttersprachler drüber ...
Die Zeitform sollte auf jeden Fall einheitlich sein - entweder alles in der Vergangenheit oder alles in der Gegenwart.
bye/raincat
Hi, Desperado,
hab einiges verändert und hoffe, es ist so ok. Evtl. schaut hier nochmal ein Muttersprachler drüber ...
Die Zeitform sollte auf jeden Fall einheitlich sein - entweder alles in der Vergangenheit oder alles in der Gegenwart.
bye/raincat