Hi ich habe dieses gedicht entworfen.
Wäre nett wenn ihr es verbessen könnte
Ich weis es ist bei Gedichten schwer, da dem schreibe viele freiheiten gelassen werden aber trozdem........(ihr dürft es auch im Inhalt verändern wenn etwas ganz falsch ist)
Danke im vorraus.........
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My mother
She is like a cat to her childern,
But if she is angry she can change to a bulldog.
She is like a sunny day,
But if she is angry she can change to a horrible Stom.
She is red – for love,
Or for pain.
She is like a lemon juce,
Tasty if you drink a bit,
but horrible if you drink to much!
She is like the Tivoli.
Nice to friends,
but bad to enemys.
She is like a forest.
Niche to go trought,
but not nice to go lost in!
but after all she is my mum
Gedicht
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Sleepy
I found this old topic while searching through the forums and thought why not trying to help this guy?Well,forgive me if my corrections are wrong,I'm only in 10th grade,so my English isn't perfect,but I tried my best ...My mother
She is like a cat to her children,
But when she gets angry she can change to a bulldog.
She is like a sunny day,
But when she gets angry she can change to a horrible storm.
She is red – like love,
Or like pain.
She is like a lemon-juice,
Tasty if you drink a bit of it,
but horrible if you drink too much!
She is like the Tivoli.
Nice to friends,
but bad to enemies.
She is like a forest.
Nice to go through,
but not nice to get lost in!
but after all she is my mum
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raincat