Szenenanalyse in Englisch

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Huhu Foris!
Wer von euch könnte den mal meine Analyse zu einer Szene aus "The Trumenshow" korrektur lesen und mir die Fehler verbessern? Bzw mir sagen was ich besser machen kann? Wäre super lieb von euch!

Film analyses

Scene: The conversation from Truman and his mother
Place: Truman’s Mother’s House, living room

Truman is telling his mother that he saw his father. He is thinking that it sounds insane. Truman’s mother is telling Truman that she see his dead husband ten times a week in different faces. But Truman is swearing that it was his dad. Dressed like a homeless man. He is finding that it was strange, because a woman with a little dog and a business man forced his father onto a bus. Truman’s mother is not responsiving to Truman, but Truman is sure of it. He is telling his mother that if it wasn’t his dad it was his twin. But his father didn’t have a twin. Truman’s mother is telling Truman that Truman just feeling bad because of what happened and that she never blamed Truman for this.

Truman and his mother are in Truman’s mother’s house in the living room. They are sitting in armchairs opposite each other. Everywhere in the room are pictures and photos in picture frames. Behind some picture frames, behind Truman’s mother is a little eye level spy cam. A second cam is behind Truman. That cam is on eye level, too. The third cam is between the armchairs father than the two other cams, in the wand or in a picture. This cam is low angel, when a person is standing. The second and the third cam are installed cams. There is no camera movement.

In the conversation from Truman and his mum the three cameras are jumping between the three camera angels. The first cam shows a close shot from Truman and the back from his mother. The second cam shows a close shot from Truman’s mum and the back of Truman. In some situations the camera range turn from a close shot to a close up to showing the facial expression from Truman or his mother better. The third cam shows both persons in the armchairs or standing next to or behind the armchair.

This scene showed definitely what happened when some unforeseen event happened. Such an event can destroy the Trumanshow.

[licorice_lilly]

Hallo!

habe mir deinen text mal angesehen... mit den zeiten solltest du etwas aufpassen... ich würde für eine szenenbeschreibung eher simple present statt continuous nehmen...

was mir noch aufgefallen ist ist dass deine beschreibung der szene relativ ausführlich ist, die analyse jedoch ziemlich mager...

hoffe das hilft dir!
grüsse,
marie


Film analysis

Scene: The conversation from between Truman and his mother
Place: Truman’s Mother’s House, living room

Truman tells his mother that he had seen his father. He thinks that it sounds insane. Truman’s mother tells Truman that she sees her dead husband ten times a week in other faces. But Truman swears that it had been his dad, dressed like a homeless man. He finds that it was strange, because that a woman with a little dog and a business man had forced his father onto a bus. Truman’s mother is not responsiving doesn't reply to Truman, but Truman is sure about it. He tells his mother that if it hadn't been his dad it would have been his twin. But his father didn’t have a twin. Truman’s mother tells Truman that he just feels bad because of what has happened and that she never blamed Truman for this.

Truman and his mother are in Truman’s mother’s house in the living room. They sit in armchairs opposite to each other. Everywhere in the room are framed pictures and photosin picture frames. Hidden behind some picture frames, behind Truman’s mother, there is a little spy cam on eye level. A second cam is placed behind Truman. This cam is on eye level, too. The third cam is located between the armchairs, further away father than the two other cams, in the wall or in a picture. (dieser satz macht irgendwie keinen sinn... eine kamara zwischen den sesseln sollte doch näher sein...) This cam is at low angle when a person is standing. (sinn???) The second and the third cam are fixed cams, there is no camera movement.

In the conversation between Truman and his mum the perspective switches three cameras are jumping between the three camera angels. The first cam shows a close shot from Truman and the back from his mother. The second cam shows a close shot from Truman’s mum and the back of Truman. In some situations the camera range turns from a close shotto a close up in order to show the facial expression of Truman or his mother better. The third cam shows both persons in the armchairs or when they stand next to or behind the armchair.

This scene shows precisely what happens when some unforeseen event happenedtakes place. Such an event can destroy ruin the Trumanshow.[/quote]