Bitte um Korrektur eines Textes

[Fantamoax]

Hallo zusammen, es wäre nett von euch wenn Ihr meinen Text korrigieren könntet.
Bei dem blauen Satz bin ich mir besonders unsicher.
Wenn Ihr eine bessere Fomulierung kennt wäre ich Euch dankbar.

Which is the best place to live?


I might be wrong, but personally I prefer the county life. I grow up in a small village, between chickens and cows and other animals, on a small farm.
I had a happy childhood. I wish that my children will have a happy childhood too. I love the village life, because the neighbourship is better than the neighbourship in the cities.
I hope that I will get an own small house with a nice garden, placed in a small village near by nature. In the garden I can enjoy the calmness or I can sit in it and having barbecue with my family and friends. In my dreams I am reading a great Book in my hammock under a great tree.

[Froop]

I might be wrong, but personally I prefer the county life. I grew up in a small village, between chickens,cows and other animals on a small farm.
I had a happy childhood. I wish that my children will have a happy childhood too. I love the village life, because the neighbourship is better than in the cities.
I hope that I will get an own small house with a nice garden, placed in a small village near some nature.(?)
In the garden I can enjoy the silence or I can sit there and have a barbecue with my family and friends.
In my dreams I am reading a great Book in my hammock under a big tree.

Ziemlich durcheinander dein Text, evtl. könntest du etwas Struktur reinbringen.
mit dem "some nature" bin ich mir nicht ganz sicher, aber "by" hört sich komisch an

[Fantamoax]

Danke für deine schnelle Hilfe

Ich werde versuchen den Text ein wenig zu ordnen.