ich mache zur Zeit einen Englischkurs und soll nächste Woche eine "show and tell" machen. Den Text hab ich fertig und auch übersetzt. Nun bin ich mir aber nicht sicher ob das alles so richtig ist. Kann mir da jemand helfen?
Hier mein Text:
These books are about people from the world Midkemia.
In the middle of this story is the magician Pug. Pug is an orphan. He grows up as kitchen-young in the duchy Crydee. He is taken on by Kulgan, a powerful magician, as a magician apprentice.
Sometime he discover with his best friend Thomas a ship wreck on the beach. After short time was clear, the ship comes from another world. Observation of Elfen and drarves report of strange troop movements. In the forrests emerge soldiers from the strange world aigain and aigain. The other world is Kelevan. The humans of Kelevan are a material people and want the valuable metal from Midkemia.
Thus war is in the world Midkemia. Pug makes hardly progressed as magician and he believes, witch he doesn´t have a talent for ist. On one travel he by soldiers of the other world is imprisoned taken and after Kelevan kidnaps.
The humans of Midkemia are seen there as babaren and held as slaves. Pug must work several years in the sump as a slave. After 9 years discovers a magician of Kelevan his talent and he is trained.
Pug were taken the memories and as magician he stands on this world outside of the law.
By a terrible event his memory returns and he go to back Midkemia.
In the stories of Raymond Feist, Pug becomes the best magician both worlds and he experience many miracles.
Raymond Feist writes in his stories over the king family and over a young thief, the one of the most important men of Midkemia becomes.
He writes also over the world Kelevan and the readers learns the life on this humans to know.