Please check if it's c orrect

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Mjbathan

Please check if it's c orrect

Beitrag von Mjbathan »

Dear *****,

Hope all is well.

Thank you for your email. 

Based on the outlined below, I will have internal discussion with my team to discuss possible options towards interfacing Radiotherapy systems with Cerner.

Accordingly, we will arrange a meeting with you and your team. I will get back to you early next week.

Best Regards, 

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Please check if it's c orrect

Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Mjbathan hat geschrieben: Dear *****,

Hope all is well.

Thank you for your email. 

Based on the outlined below, I will have an internal discussion with my team to discuss possible options towards interfacing Radiotherapy systems with Cerner.

Accordingly, we will arrange a meeting with you and your team. I will get back to you early next week.

Best Regards, 

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Please check if it's c orrect

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Keswick hat geschrieben:
Mjbathan hat geschrieben: Dear *****,

Hope all is well.

Thank you for your email. 

Based on the outlined below, I will have an internal discussion with my team about possible options towards interfacing Radiotherapy systems with Cerner.

Accordingly, we will arrange a meeting with you and your team. I will get back to you early next week.

Best Regards, 
Habe noch eine kleine Doppelgemoppeligkeit gefunden...
Grüße
Duckduck

stasys

Re: Please check if it's c orrect

Beitrag von stasys »

Liebe Ducky, worin besteht diese Tautologie, diese Doppelmoppeligkeit wie du sagst. Warum geht discussion about hier nicht? LG Bon und danke 

Keswick (Contributor)

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Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Ich mische mich ein. Die Verdoppelung bestand hier im "eine Diskussion um zu diskutieren". Das ist nicht notwendig, weder im Englischen noch im Deutschen, da eine Diskussion bereits auf die Aktion des diskutierens hinweist.

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Please check if it's c orrect

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

:freu: :jo: :freu: :jo:

ClayGlover

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Beitrag von ClayGlover »

The same words should not be doubled as it is incorrect in terms of both the English Grammar and German Language. The word 'discussion' being used already stipulates the occurrence of that act. To add 'discuss' again, will only make it cluttered and grammatically incorrect as discussion is a word that leads to a gesture where two or more people discuss, or you can say converse over something.