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Beitrag von Fantamoax »

Hello friends,
unser Lehrer hat uns gestern einen Text vorgelesen und wir sollen ihn kurz zusammenfassen, bitte schau mal jemand drüber.

und kann mir jemand sagen wie übersetzt wird Die ...... machten sich nach einer Fahrt bezahlt

Sacramento is a city some hundred Km from San Francisco away.
The gold rush started in the year 1849 in California. All the people came from everywhere to California. Their were two ways to came to California. One Way across the Rooky Mountains and one way over the sea passed(vorbei an?) Kap Horn. In 1848 landed two sailing ships in San Francisco. One Year later in 1849 landed 742 Sailing ships San Francisco. The inhabitant of San Francisco invented a new fast sailing ship. This ship was named California clipper. Those ships made after one passage to San Francisco profit.
In San Francisco 8 % of the population were women in 1848

great thanks

$pidermonkey

Beitrag von $pidermonkey »

Sacramento is a city some hundred kilometres (Keine Abkürzungen in Texten) away from San Francisco. [strike]away[/strike].
The gold rush started in the year 1849 in California. All the people came from everywhere to California. There were two ways to come to California. One way was across the Rocky Mountains and one way was over the along Cape Hoorn. In 1848, [strike]landed[/strike] two sailing ships landed in San Francisco. One year later, in 1849, [strike]landed[/strike] 742 sailing ships landed in San Francisco. The inhabitants of San Francisco invented a new fast sailing ship. This ship was named California Clipper. These ships paid/brought success after one passage to San Francisco.
[strike]In San Francisco 8 % of the population were women in 1848[/strike] In 1848, 8 % of the population in 1848 were women.

Du hast eine etwas seltsame Großschreibung hin und wieder.. Auch mit der verbstellung musst du aufpassen, es ist nicht immer wie im Deutschen.

Cliff

Beitrag von Cliff »

zwei Dinge noch:
The Gold Rush started [strike]in the year 1849[/strike] in California in the year 1848.
1) Ich würde Gold Rush groß schreiben, da es sich hier um ein historisches Ereignis handelt.
2) Ort vor Zeit: in California in 1848