ich würde gerne einen Text einstellen der dann von euch auf Still/Grammatik/Rechtschreibung überprüft wird. Falls ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge habt, nur her damit.
LGDear Sir or Madam,
I want to take position about the new regulation of phone ban. I hope to convince you that a complete mobile phone ban is not necessary. I think there are a few but important reasons to allow pupils taking their cell phone with them. Most of the people only carry their mobile phones with them to contact their parents or if they need to be picked up after school.
In my opinion it might be useful if teachers explain their pupils how to use such devices properly. This devices should be integrated into school lessons and should help students to solve lesson-related stuff. Of course, students cannot play games or chat while at school, that would be a misuse and should be punished.
So I would therefore ask the school administration to change their mobile phone policy.
By allowing pupils to use their phones on a certain spot at school you could make a welcome concession.
Yours sincerely,
Max Mustermann
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