I would be very grateful if someone could look over my short monologue!
Here it is:
It is completely understandable that he objects to talk to me the whole week long. However, he is supposed to listen to me in order to understand my intention for planning behind his back. Don't misunderstand me cause I am utterly fed up with his behaviour, him constantly running away from measure problems in life. Even though I truely love him as my adult brother, I feel bad as his sister, letting him live his own life under such miserable circumstances.
Our family is shortly before splitting up into pieces and thus, I am totally devastated cause everyone solely caring for his own wealth and life. What kind of family am I living in?
Seriously, I just want to clarify that life should not end up in that way, instead we should stay strong and convinced in order to fight for a better family relationship. Giving up is never a solution, though most people believe it.
We are human beings and possess a brain which enables us to think creatively. That is to say, humans are special and unique because them having the opportunity to find a way to solve complicated problems by themselves.
: cause ist keine akzeptable Abkuerzung fuer because. Im Umgangssprachlichen findet sich oft 'cause aber hier braucht es a) den Apostrophe und b) ist eine solche Abkuerzung in Texten nicht gelungen.
: However, he is supposed to listen to me in order to understand 
