Schon wieder eine Bewerbung

[VeryBritish]

Hallo Community,
ich würde gerne ein Bewerbungs-Schreiben für ein Praktikum auf einem Neuseeländischen Weingut schreiben. Bin mir nicht zu 100% sicher ob das so passt; was meint Ihr?

Dear Sirs,

my name is ****, I am an italian Sommelier and WSET Diploma Student who is about to start a bachelor degree course in “International Wine Business” at Geisenheim University in Germany.

To enter in this course, an 8 weeks winery-internship in the departments of winegrowing (4 weeks) and winemaking (4 weeks) is required.

Since I already know a lot of Italian, austrian and german wineries and their way of working, I’d really like to gain experience in a “new world”-company.

Given the enviable reputation of your winery and the outstanding quality of your wines, which really appeals to me, I’d like to apply for the internship at your business.

Obviously I’ll do this without any salary and accommodation will be arranged by me!

Regarding the date, I am very flexible and can start working at any time from the end of January to the end of June.

 

I would be very grateful to get this great opportunity at look forward to hear from you.

Please find attached my CV.

 

Yours faithfully

 

Max Mustermann

Vielen Dank im Voraus!!
VeryBritish

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo Community,
ich würde gerne ein Bewerbungs-Schreiben für ein Praktikum auf einem Neuseeländischen Weingut schreiben. Bin mir nicht zu 100% sicher ob das so passt; was meint Ihr?

Dear Sir and Madam,

My name is ****, I am an Italian sommelier and WSET diploma student who is about to start a bachelor degree course in “International Wine Business” at the Geisenheim University in Germany.

To take part in this course, an 8 weeks winery-internship in the departments of wine growing (4 weeks) and wine making (4 weeks) is required.

Since I already know a lot of Italian, Austrian and German wineries and their way of working, I’d really like to gain experience in a “new world”-company.

Given the enviable reputation of your winery and the outstanding quality of your wines, which really appeals to me, I’d like to apply for the internship at your business.

Obviously I'd work unpaid, and accommodation would be arranged by me.

Regarding the date, I am very flexible and can start working at any time from the end of January to the end of June.

 

I would be very grateful to get this great opportunity and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Please find attached my CV.

 

Yours faithfully

 

Max Mustermann

Vielen Dank im Voraus!!
VeryBritish