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Lila-Kate

Bitte um Korrektur

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Hallo,
Muss mal wieder einen Englisch Aufsatz schreiben und bräuchte bitte jemanden der mich ausbessert. Dankeschön!  :)
LG Lila 

The owl
My selected animal is a owl.
There are over 140 different species of owls. Owls live on all continents but not in Antarctica. They can live in forst, stepps, mountains or suburb. Some owl species are threatened because of deforestationof forests.

A owl is a raptor and a carnivore. They eat frogs, littel rodents and lizards. Owls have wings and feathers. The feathers can have different colors such as white, brown or gray.They have sharp claws and can really good to see and hear.

Schuyler

Re: Bitte um Korrektur

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The owl
My chosen animal is an owl.
There are over 140 different species of owls. Owls live on every continent, except Antarctica. They can live in forests, steppes, mountains or suburbs. Some owl species are threatened because of deforestation of forests.

Owls are raptors and carnivores. They eat frogs, little rodents and lizards. Owls have wings and feathers. The feathers can have different colors such as white, brown or gray. Owls have sharp talons and can see and hear really well.

Lila-Kate

Re: Bitte um Korrektur

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Vielen Dank fürs ausbessern. :)
LG Lila