Katrin's suggestions

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Hi, folks!

I wrote only Katrin's sentences. Helen's sentences were given. 

Helen: Of course I have to book a hotel for them. What sort of hotel do you think they would feel the most comfortable in?
Katrin: I favour Claridge's or The Dorchester hotel. 
Helen: What about when they visit the company itself? Obviously, they will need a lot of information about the products which they are    interested in but what else do you think we should do with them. 
Katrin: You could do a guided tour through a factory. 
Helen: Then there's the problem of restaurants. What sort of food do you think they would enjoy the most? 
Katrin: I think, you can't do something wrong with a Holy Smoke restaurant. They are some different sort of food. 
Helen: We have to entertain them too. What activities or trips should we plan for them?
Katrin: You can suggest them Victoria and Albert museum or the Tate Modern. 
Helen: You're the only one here who speaks German fluently. I wonder how good their English is. Do we need to hire a translator? 
Katrin: No, we don't. They speak English fluently. 
Helen: Finally, I have to organise some gifts for them to take home with them. What do you think would be suitable? 
Katrin: I think, an iPad with a good bottle of wine is fine as a gift. 

Tanks in advance! 

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hi, folks!

I wrote only Katrin's sentences. Helen's sentences were given. 

Helen: Of course I have to book a hotel for them. What sort of hotel do you think they would feel the most comfortable in?
Katrin: I favour Claridge's or The Dorchester hotel. 
Helen: What about when they visit the company itself? Obviously, they will need a lot of information about the products which they are    interested in but what else do you think we should do with them. 
Katrin: You could do a guided tour through a factory. 
Helen: Then there's the problem of restaurants. What sort of food do you think they would enjoy the most? 
Katrin: I think, you can't go wrong with the Holy Smoke restaurant. They do food that is a bit different. 
Helen: We have to entertain them too. What activities or trips should we plan for them?
Katrin: You could suggest them the Victoria and Albert museum or the Tate Modern. 
Helen: You're the only one here who speaks German fluently. I wonder how good their English is. Do we need to hire a translator? 
Katrin: No, we don't. They speak English fluently. 
Helen: Finally, I have to organise some gifts for them to take home with them. What do you think would be suitable? 
Katrin: I think, an iPad with a good bottle of wine is fine as a gift. 

Tanks in advance! 

Wow.. can I have an iPad and a bottle of wine, too? 

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Thanks Keswick!

I am generous!

[Schuyler]

Helen: Of course, I have to book a hotel for them. What sort of hotel do you think they would feel the most comfortable in?
Katrin: I favour Claridge's or The Dorchester hotel. 
Helen: What about when they visit the company itself? Obviously, they will need a lot of information about the products which they are interested in, but what else do you think we should do with them?
Katrin: You could do a guided tour through the factory. 
Helen: Then there's the problem of restaurants. What sort of food do you think they would enjoy the most? 
Katrin: I think [no comma] you can't go wrong with the Holy Smoke restaurant. They make food that is a bit different. 
Helen: We have to entertain them, too. What activities or trips should we plan for them?
Katrin: You could suggest them the Victoria and Albert museum or the Tate Modern to them. [Or better: "You could suggest they visit the Victoria and Albert museum or the Tate Modern."
Helen: You're the only one here who speaks German fluently. I wonder how good their English is. Do we need to hire a translator? 
Katrin: No, we don't. They speak English fluently. 
Helen: Finally, I have to organise some gifts for them to take home with them. What do you think would be suitable? 
Katrin: I think [no comma] an iPad with a good bottle of wine is fine as a gift.

Thanks in advance!

A few more small corrections.


Oh, and I want an iPad and some wine, too. Gib sie mir!

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I could give you an iBreadboard.  

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Kommas und ich.. das wird nie eine tiefe Freundschaft..   .