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[goodox]

Hi everyone! 

I have to write about a product that I bought and are satisfied with (about 100 words). 

I bought an iPhone 6. Prior I had an iPhone 4s and I was satisfied with. It was user-friendly and had a nice design, too. But the display was a little bit small. The iPhone 6 have exactly the right size that I like because I read much on the iPhone, particularly at work. I have a MacBook Pro at home and they are synced and work fine together. The apple products are not only a technical good, they are looking very nobel. I never would changed to another product because I get good experience with them. 

Thanks! 

[Schuyler]

Hi, everyone! 

I have to write about a product that I bought and am satisfied with (about 100 words). 

I bought an iPhone 6. Prior to that, I had an iPhone 4s, and I was satisfied with it. It was user-friendly and had a nice design, too. But the display was a little bit small. [Or: "... the display was a little bit too small."] The iPhone 6 is exactly the right size that I like because I read a lot on my phone, particularly at work. [Or: "The iPhone 6 is exactly the right size because I read a lot on my phone ..."] I have a MacBook Pro at home, and it and my phone are synced and work well together. The Apple products are not only good in a technical sense but also look very noble. ["Noble" sounds a little strange in this context. You could say they look "cool" or "nice" instead.] I would never want to switch to a different product because I have had a good experience with Apple products. 

Thanks!

You have about 112 words now.

[goodox]

Thanks Schuyler!