Text with 200 Words.

[goodox]

Hi everyone!

Here's my assignment: Write about 200 words telling a visitor from another country what he/she should or should not do in your country. 

I'm sorry for so many mistakes, but I can't better. 

In German are allowed serious discussions in a public. They like to talk about politics or philosophy, but please, avoid small talk. This is what they don't like. If you want to talk to someone, then you should be formal. You should use "Sie" in conversations, they let you know when you can use "du". If somebody introduce you to someone, so you should give your hand to handshake. If you don't do this, it would be rude. If you want to take a phone call, then you should introduce you with your name. After you did it, you can ask them, whether they can speak in English. Please, don't go as a pedestrian on a red marked bikeway. It could happen, that someone collide with you or they yell at you. German People like to be punctual, when you don't want be disgrace oneself, you should be punctual. Don't get drunk, even if the Alkohol flows well. You shouldn't start eat before the host don't say "Guten Appetit". One more thing, what you should consider. Be don't unwary, if you cross the road. No one of natives do it. You could get a penalty. Enjoy German and have fun. 

Thanks for helping!

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You shouldn't start eat, bevor the host doesn't say "Guten Appetit". 

[Alyssea]

Hi everyone!

Here's my assignment: Write about 200 words telling a visitor from another country what he/she should or should not do in your country. 

I'm sorry for having so many mistakes, but it's the best I can do. 

You're fine  You'll get better with practice. 

In Germany, many people have serious discussions in public. We like to talk about politics and philosophy, but you should avoid small talk. That's what we don't like. If you want to talk to someone, you should be formal. You should use "Sie" in conversations, and you'll be told if you can use "du" instead. If somebody introduces you to someone else, you should shake their hand. Not doing that would be considered rude. If you want to make a phone call, you should introduce yourself with your name. After you do that, you can ask them if they can speak English. Please, don't go on a red-marked bikeway as a pedestrian. Someone might collide with you or yell at you. Germans like to be punctual; if you don't want to disgrace yourself, you should be punctual. Don't get drunk, even if there's an abundant amount of alcohol. You shouldn't start eating before the host says "Guten Appetit". There's one more thing that you should consider. Be wary if you cross the road. No natives do it because you could get a penalty. Enjoy Germany and have fun. 

Thanks for helping!

You're 11 words away from 200 with my edit, so you may want to add another sentence.

[Alyssea]

15 words away now, heh. I made a couple more edits. 

[goodox]

Thanks Alyssea!
I have one sentence more. 

Before you take your first sip of beer, you should say "Prost" and looking directly to your opposite eyes. 

[Alyssea]

Thanks Alyssea!
I have one sentence more. 

Before you take your first sip of beer, you should say "Prost" and look directly into the eyes of the person opposite you.