environment (kurz)

[alicewummerland]

Hallo ihr Lieben ich bin neu hier

Um euch nicht gleich mit dem ganzen comment zu erschlagen und ich mir dadurch auch eine baldigere Antwort erhoffe (da die Klausur schon morgen ist), habe ich nur einen Teil meines Comments über "environment" beigefügt.

Ist dieser Teil grammatisch richtig?


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"First of all, it should be said, that some people think, global warming is an natural process, which we should not confirm.
They say, that a higher emission is attributable to natural causes, like volcanic eruptions or natural exhaust from animals.

It is true, that some animals, especially farmed cattle, produce more air pollution than the industry. "

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liebe Grüße euch schickt Alice

[Alyssea]

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"First of all, it should be said that some people think global warming is an natural process, which we should not confirm.
They say that greater amounts of emissions are attributable to natural causes, like volcanic eruptions or natural exhaust from animals.

It is true that some animals, especially farmed cattle, produce more air pollution than the industry. "

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"Say" doesn't need a comma after it unless you're quoting something (He said, "Hi."). Took out a few other unneeded commas, too.

[alicewummerland]

Danke sehr!
Ich hab das jetzt etwas anders umschrieben:
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First of all, it should be said that some people think, global warming is an natural process, which we can't prevent.
That means, that greater amounts of emissions are attributable to natural causes, like volcanic eruptions or natural exhausts from animals.
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[Alyssea]

Danke sehr!
Ich hab das jetzt etwas anders umschrieben:
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First of all, it should be said that some people think global warming is an natural process that we can't prevent.
That means that greater amounts of emissions are attributable to natural causes, like volcanic eruptions or natural exhaust from animals.
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It might be helpful for you to go over English comma usage. These commas (that I removed) interrupt the flow of the sentences, and aren't needed. 
Also, "They say that..." at the beginning of the second sentence sounds better, if you are distancing yourself from the people who think global warming is natural, rather than agreeing that it's caused by natural things.