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Hello everybody,
I have to write a short text and I need your help again. Thank you in advance!

Augustdorf is a big village in the woods. They have over ten thousand inhabitant and it is the youngest village in average. Augustdorf have a small industrial area but therefor a big army base. The army is one of (the) important economic source for Augustdorf. What I could mention is, that there is a little private ostrich farm. I personal like the simplicity of Augustdorf. For example, to see the mayor how he's go for a walk with his children every week. 

Alyssea

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goodox hat geschrieben:Hello everybody,
I have to write a short text and I need your help again. Thank you in advance!

Augustdorf is a big village in the woods. It has over 10,000 inhabitants and is the youngest village on average. Augustdorf has a small industrial area, but consequently has room for a big army base. The army is an important economic source for Augustdorf. Another interesting fact is that there is a little private ostrich farm. I, personally, like the simplicity of Augustdorf. For example, it's nice to see the mayor go for a walk with his children every week. 

goodox

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Thank you Alyssea!