Korrektur einer Charakterisierung

[todo2013]

Hallo zusammen,
könnte sich mal jemand meine Charakterisierung zu einer Figur aus dem Buch "Stone Cold" von Robert Swindell vornehmen?

In the novel “Stone Cold” written by Robert Swindell first published by Hamish Hamilton in 1993 the character Gail plays an important role. The reader is introduced to her in chapter twelve when Gail enters Link’s life after Gingers’s disappearance. In Link’s eyes she is a fantastic-looking young woman, so Link could not tear his eyes away and totally falls in love with her.  She wears a green knitted cap over her chestnut-coloured hair and has a Scottish accent. Gail pretends to be a vulnerable and scared girl and that she needs Link’s support because she is new on the streets. But in real she is very self-confident and has everything under control, every time. She insinuates oneself into Link’s confidence and elicits a great deal of information by asking many questions about living and survival on the streets. These points show me that she is manipulative, deceitful, selfish and dishonest. Gail and Link roam the streets and try to solve the misery about Ginger and other missing street kids. When Link is in Shelter’s home, Gail calls the police and saves his live. Here you can say she acts kindly, apprehensively and compassionately. Moreover she is generous because she often pays for food and drink. Furthermore Gail is strange and very independent because she always leaves to phone her sister, as she says. But finally she turns out to be a journalist who has only used Link for her investigations and does not help Link to come over his homelessness. She just gives Link money and leaves.

Vielen lieben Dank schon mal im Voraus  
LG

[Alyssea]

In the novel “Stone Cold” written by Robert Swindell and first published by Hamish Hamilton in 1993, the character Gail plays an important role. The reader is introduced to Gail in chapter twelve when she enters Link’s life after Ginger's disappearance. In Link’s eyes, she is a fantastic-looking young woman, so Link could not tear his eyes away, and falls in love with her at first sight.  She wears a green knitted cap over her chestnut-coloured hair and has a Scottish accent. Gail pretends to be a vulnerable and scared girl who needs Link’s support because she is new on the streets. But in reality, she is very self-confident and always has everything under control. She gains Link’s confidence and elicits a great deal of information by asking many questions about living and survival on the streets. These points show me that she is manipulative, deceitful, selfish, and dishonest. Gail and Link roam the streets and try to solve the mystery about Ginger and other missing street kids. When Link is in Shelter’s home, Gail calls the police and saves his life. Here you can say she acts kindly, apprehensively, and compassionately. Moreover, she is generous because she often pays for food and drinks. Furthermore, Gail is strange and very independent because she always leaves to phone her sister, as she says. Finally, she turns out to be a journalist who has only used Link for her investigations, and does not help him overcome his poverty. She just gives Link money and leaves.