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goodox

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Beitrag von goodox »

Hallo,
ich meine es müsste alles soweit passen bis auf 11, da bin ich mir nicht so sicher. 

… and now the traffic (1) news for the Christmas weekend. The northbound (2) carriageway of the M1 has been reduced to one lane (3) because of road works (4) between Norman Cross and Peterborough. Police (5) say drivers should leave the motorway at junction (6) 16 and use the A15 as far (7) as Orton Longueville.
There will be heavy (8) traffic on all main (9) roads because of people driving home to visit their families. To avoid long delay (10) start as early as possible and don’t travel on the 24th.

And finally cold weather and rain are expect (11) on Friday evening so roads could be wet (12). Please drive careful (13). And remember when you’re sitting in a queue - keep your head (14). It’s Christmas!

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

goodox hat geschrieben:Hallo,
ich meine es müsste alles soweit passen bis auf 11, da bin ich mir nicht so sicher. 

… and now the traffic (1) news for the Christmas weekend. The northbound (2) carriageway of the M1 has been reduced to one lane (3) because of road works (4) between Norman Cross and Peterborough. Police (5) say drivers should leave the motorway at junction (6) 16 and use the A15 as far (7) as Orton Longueville.
There will be heavy (8) traffic on all main (9) roads because of people driving home to visit their families. To avoid long delay (10) start as early as possible and don’t travel on the 24th.[/size]

And finally cold weather and rain are expected (11) on Friday evening so roads could be wet (12). Please drive careful (13). And remember when you’re sitting in a queue - keep your head (14). It’s Christmas!

Soweit so gut! Prima!

Grüße
Duckduck

goodox

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Beitrag von goodox »

Danke!! :)

Alyssea

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Beitrag von Alyssea »

Duckduck hat geschrieben:
goodox hat geschrieben: … and now the traffic (1) news for the Christmas weekend. The northbound (2) carriageway of the M1 has been reduced to one lane (3) because of roadwork (this is normally one word, also shouldn't have an s at the end) (4) between Norman Cross and Peterborough. Police (5) say drivers should leave the motorway at junction (6) 16 and use the A15 as far (7) as Orton Longueville.
There will be heavy (8) traffic on all main (9) roads because of people driving home to visit their families. To avoid long delays (this could either be "a long delay" or "long delays," I prefer the latter) (10) start as early as possible and don’t travel on the 24th.[/size]

And finally cold weather and rain are expected (11) on Friday evening so roads could be wet (12). Please drive carefully (13). And remember when you’re sitting in a queue - keep your head (14). It’s Christmas!

Keswick (Contributor)

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Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Alyssea, in BE road works is two words and is written with an S at the end.

Alyssea

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Beitrag von Alyssea »

Actually looks like Wikipedia and a bunch of UK news articles all use it as one word, even more than we do in the US, but as far as the S, yeah.. That's odd, but my bad. 

Keswick (Contributor)

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Just noticed, according to Oxford and Cambridge, it can be roadworks or road works, either way in BE the "s" is required.