wir lesen in der Schule grade das Buch "The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian" und müssen jetzt zu den ersten drei Kapitel einen Summary schreiben, der dann auch abgegeben und benotet wird.
Ich bin grade mit dem Schreiben fertig geworden und da ich nicht unbedingt die Beste in Englisch bin, würde ich mich sehr freuen, wenn jemand kurz Zeit findet und meinen Text einmal durchliest und dann korrigiert.
Meiner Lehrerin ist unser Sprachstil (nicht das der Text nur vom Deutschen übersetzt ist) besonders wichtig und das die Sätze auch gut mit Konnektoren verknüpft sind. Aber genau das und die Grammatik ist eher meine Schwäche.
Ich würde mich wirklich sehr freuen, wenn sich das jemand in den nächsten Tagen anschauen und korrigieren würde.
Liebe Grüße
Carina
Hier noch der Text:
The first three chapters of the book “The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian” written by Sherman Alexie and published in 2007 are about the narrator Junior and his life in a Indian rez.
At the beginning the narrator Junior tells the readers from his brain damage at birth because he was born with water on the brain. As a result he has too many teeth, lopsided glasses and different proportions. In Juniors childhood he often gets beaten up from the other kids in the rez. Concerning his big head the most kids called him Orbit or Globe.
His favourite hobby is to cartoon all what he is known. If Junior draw, he feel important and like an famous artist.
He lives with his family in a house in the rez, but his parents are very poor. The family is so poor that they can not call the vet when Juniors dog Oscar, his “best friend”, gets sick. Finally his father has to shoot Oscar despite Juniors desperate cries.
Furthermore, he talk about the dreams from his parents. His mum want to be teacher an his dad a famous jazz sax player, but both came from poor homes and therefore they can not achieve their dreams.
Juniors best friend is called Rowdy and he cheered Junior after Oscars dead. Junior describes him as a the toughest kid on the rez with a strong and mean character like a snake. Rowdy beats everybody up no matter whether they are innocent or guilty. He always contends for Junior and protects him against attacks from the other kids on the rez. Because of that Rowdy cuts off the braids of the Andruss brothers who tortured Junior at the powwow festival.
