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sanane11

ein kleiner Text

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:freak1: Hallo , 
Ich hätte hier einen kleinen Text :)
In this scene X is walking alone on the Moors on afternoon. Then she hears the sound of hoofbeets and a black dog appears out of the woods.This dog runs directly into the direction she stands at and frightens her. After the wild dog, a man on horseback appears while the black horse is galopping thunderously and finally rears up, throwing its rider to the ground. X rushes ( kann man das so sagen, bei einer summary? ) to help the man but the man, who is in his late 30's, has dark hair and dark eyes, and is wearing black clothes,  refuses her offer to help him and calls her a witch who has bewitched his horse. Furthermore, he commands X to bring the horse to him but after seeing that she is unable to do that, he wants her to come to him( er ruft sie zu sich ). X goes to him and she helps him to go to the horse and bestride it. Moreover he asks her where she is from and what she is doing on the moors. X answers that she is on  her way to the post office and presents  ( also im Sinne von , sie sagt qer sie ist , wo sie wohnt etc. )herself to him.
Ich würde mich sehr freuen wenn jemand dies korrigieren könnte:)

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: ein kleiner Text

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sanane11 hat geschrieben::freak1: Hallo , Auch Hallo, dann schauen wir mal...


In this scene, X is walking alone on the moor in the afternoon, when she hears (the sound of) thundering hoofbeats and a black dog appears out of the woods.

It
runs straight towards her and she is frightened.

After the wild dog gallops a rider on a black horse that suddenly rears up and throws him - a black-haired and dark-eyed man his late thirties, wearing black clothes - to the ground.

X rushes to his side to help him, but he rebuffs her offer and calls her a witch who has bewitched his horse.

He then orders X to lead the horse back to him but when he realises that she is unable to do that he calls her to his side and she helps him to get on the horse again.

Then he asks her where she is from and what she is doing on the moor.

X introduces herself and says that she is on her way to the post office.
:)

So, das wäre mein Vorschlag!

Grüße
Duckduck


sanane11

Re: ein kleiner Text

Beitrag von sanane11 »

Danke sehr :)

Eine letzte Frage noch hierzu : 

Kann man sagen, 

He appears in a cold atmosphere because it is icy cold outside and everything seems to be frozen . This highlights him being mysterious. ( also mit cold atmospere meine ich ,  dasd die Natur so eingefroren wirkt , und alles grau ist )