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[Danny1998]

Good morning everyone!

Today I will talk with you about a German rapper.
He´s from Libanon, today 27 years old, lives in Aachen and under contract in the label “Universal Music”.
I´ll tell you something about my favorit German artist: MoTrip.

MoTrip alias “MoDirtyShit” is a German rapper- his name comes from the arrabian “MuTrip”, it´s mean “artist”.
His real name isMohamed El Moussaoui.
A characteristic on him was his rough voice.
He also has very special textes and doesn´t rap about bitches, the street, ghetto or else.
- He doesn´t rap like the other Gangster, he rapping about the world, problems, or anything else.
But 3 years ago, in 2012 where he become succed, he makes gangster rap.

“Embryo” – his first album come 2012 out, and his carrier starts.
With the song “Kennen” he become well-known, also outside his fanbase, or the rap community.
Since then, he was an approved rapper.
Embryo had 19.000 sales figures.

After his success he still ghostwriting.
What is ghostwriting?
I want to tell it for you: Ghostwriting means, when a rapper writes textes, or in MoTrips case complete albums, for another rapper.
MoTrip writing Airmax Muzik II for Fler, A.M.Y.F, Das echte Leben, Nicht so wie ihr, for Bushido, and much more.
Then, 1 year later he present his song “Guten morgen NSA”, featuring Elmo – this was his first Single-Chart hit.
The song was for one week on place 80.
Since this song MoTrip works more together with Elmo.

2 years later, MoTrip realiese his album “Mama”.
He said that this album is for the greatest woman on the wold – his mum.
Mama was his second album and his succed album.
In July 2015 Mama has18 thousend sales figures.
MoTrip helps his old friends Elmo and JokA, with help from Mama to get more attention.
With the hit “So wie du bist”, featuring Larry MoTrip gets the gold status.
You can only get the gold status with a single, when your song gets 100 thousend sales.

Today MoTrip lives togheter with his girlfriend Larissa in Aachen.
Larissa isn´t famous.
MoTrip said, that his biggest dream for the future is, to get some children.


So, this was my short presentation about MoTrip, I hope that you enjoy it, and thanks for your attentation.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

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Keswick