Vorstellung in 10 Sätzen

[Black_TDI]

Hallo
Wir schreiben bald Englisch Klausur und wir sollen uns in 10 Sätzen vorstellen.
My name is ... and I'm 27 years old.
I was born in Bayern and lived there six months. But I live since twelfe years in Heining in France.I have not got brothers and sisters. My hobbies are making sport and playing computer games. I got a girlfriend she's name is ... and she is 21 years old. She is also from France. I work at Dillinger Hütte as mechanik. There it is very nice. After my technical school I want to begin engineer.

Wäre das so in Ordnung?

Lg Black_TDI

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo Hallo Black-TDI und willkommen im Forum! 

Wir schreiben bald eine Englisch Klausur und wir sollen uns in 10 Sätzen vorstellen.

My name is ... and I'm (oder I am) 27 years old.

I was born in Bavaria and lived there for six months. -> 6 Monate lang

But I have been living in Heining in France for twelve years now. 1. Present Perfect Continuous, weil eine (längere) Handlung in der Vergangenheit begonnen hat und noch andauert. 2. "since" heißt "seit", aber Du verwendest es mit einem Zeitpunkt, nicht mit einer Zeitdauer. Also: I have been living...since 2004. Oder: I have been living...for 12 years.

I have not got any brothers and sisters.

My hobbies are doing sport and playing computer games.


I have got a girlfriend, her name is ... and she is 21 years old. Besitzanzeigende Fürwörter: mein = my, dein = your, sein = his, ihr = her, sein = its, unser = our, euer = your, ihr = their.

She is from France as well.

I work at Dillinger Hütte as a mechanic.

It is very nice there.

After my technical school I want to become an engineer.

Wäre das so in Ordnung? Nun, mit ein paar kleinen Änderungen...

Lg Black_TDI

Grüße
Duckduck