Satzbau

[Angie1986]

Hallo, kann jemand kontrollieren, ob der Satzbau richtig ist?!?

Are e-mails a good way to communicate? Why/why not?

E-mails are a good communication form, because it can be delivered fast than a letter. An e-mail is free, a letter not. It saves paper (envelope, writing paper) and environment (No transport required by car). The retrieval is possible anywhere. A letter will be sent to a specific address . An email even to an address ; this is , however, available from any Internet-enabled PC in the world. Quick question - Response communication is only possible with e-mails. Why E -mails can not be a good form of communication is that it will never reach the personality of a letter. A printout of the e-mail can never equal a really personal custom built letter. Spam mails !!! Since e-mails are free , it is possible to send a virtually unlimited amount of them : Unsolicited commercial arises!

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo, kann jemand kontrollieren, ob der Satzbau richtig ist?!? Hi, angie1986. Frohes neues Jahr!

Are e-mails a good way to communicate? Why/why not?

E-mails are a good mode of communication because they can be delivered faster than letters. An e-mail is free, where a letter is not, and it saves paper (envelope, writing paper) and the environment since no transport by car is required. Whereas an email can be received and sent from basically anywhere - provided there is an Internet-enabled PC - a letter has to be sent to and received at a specific address. On top of that, a quick question - response communication is only possible with e-mails. But e-mail communication also has its drawbacks, viz. it will never be as personal as a letter. Even a printout of the e-mail can never equal a handwritten letter. Furthermore, as it is possible to send a virtually unlimited amount of e-mails - e.g. unsolicited commercials - free of cost, spam mails have become a widespread nuisance.

So, hier meine Anmerkungen und Vorschläge. Nicht alles, was hier verbessert wurde, war an sich falsch, aber es hörte sich teilweise etwas holperig an. Für Dich ist es sicher nicht ganz einfach, das eine vom anderen zu unterscheiden, sorry.
Grüße
Duckduck