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Hicham7

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Beitrag von Hicham7 »

Dear Parents of the Crow group,

I have a upgrade of the contact list. There are two mistakes of the E-Mail adress.

Facts to the meeting with Ms Jamison are:

Closure times
Summerholidays 03.08.2016 - 26.08.2016
Winterholidays 27.12.16 - 30.12.16

Crew Change
The nursury have not enough employees or new candidates. Ms. Jamison will order new employees at the agency for temporary work.
Inside the foyee, you can show on the Bord the actual employeess or the Info letter from Ms Jamison.

Interior design
Ms Jamison allows a new room design. The nursery teachter have material, magnetic tape for walls.

Our Cups of the Crow group
the Colibri groups ask why  we bring ower cups. We give them a positiv feedback for this cours of action.

I wish you have a mery christmas an a happy new year 2016

If you have any question or trouble you can contact me all time.

Best regards

Schuyler

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Beitrag von Schuyler »

Dear Parents of the Crow group,

I have a update for the contact list. There are two mistakes in the e-mail addresses.

The topics discussed in the meeting with Ms Jamison are as follows:

Closure times
Summer holidays 03.08.2016 - 26.08.2016
Winter holidays 27.12.16 - 30.12.16

Crew Change
The nursery does not have enough employees or new candidates. Ms Jamison will hire new employees from the agency for temporary work.
Inside the foyer, you can see an employee list and the info letter from Ms Jamison on the board.

Interior design
Ms Jamison will allow for a new room design. The nursery teacher has the materials, such as magnetic tape for the walls.

Our Cups of the Crow group
The Colibri groups have asked why we brought over cups. We have given them a positive feedback for this course of action. [Könntest du erklären, was du mit diesem Satz ausdrücken willst? "We have encouraged them to use the cups," vielleicht, oder meinst du etwas anderes?]

I wish you all have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year in 2016.

If you have any questions or trouble, you can contact me anytime.

Best regards

Keswick (Contributor)

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Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Schuyler hat geschrieben:
Dear Parents of the Crow group,

I have an update for the contact list. There are two mistakes in the e-mail addresses.

The topics discussed in the meeting with Ms Jamison are as follows:

Closure times
Summer holidays 03.08.2016 - 26.08.2016
Winter holidays 27.12.16 - 30.12.16

Crew Change
The nursery does not have enough employees or new candidates. Ms Jamison will hire new employees from the agency for temporary work.
Inside the foyer, you can see an employee list and the info letter from Ms Jamison on the board.

Interior design
Ms Jamison will allow for a new room design. The nursery teacher has the materials, such as magnetic tape for the walls.

Our Cups of the Crow group
The Colibri groups have asked why we brought over cups. We have given them a positive feedback for this course of action. [Könntest du erklären, was du mit diesem Satz ausdrücken willst? "We have encouraged them to use the cups," vielleicht, oder meinst du etwas anderes?]

I wish you all have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year in 2016.

If you have any questions or trouble, you can contact me anytime.

Best regards
Ganz kleines Fehlerchen uebersehen ;)

Hicham7

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Beitrag von Hicham7 »

Our Cups of the Crow group
The Colibri groups have asked why we brought over cups. We have given them a positive feedback for this course of action. [Könntest du erklären, was du mit diesem Satz ausdrücken willst? "We have encouraged them to use the cups," vielleicht, oder meinst du etwas anderes?]


Es geht um folgenden Satz:

Eigene Trinkbecher
Das Mitbringen von Trinkbecher wurde von der Colibrigruppe hinterfragt. Da wir bislang positve Erfahrungen gemacht haben wurde unsere Empfehlung der Vereinheitlichung ausgesprochen.