Da ich mein Englisch für die Jahrgangsstufe nächstes Jahr verbessern möchte habe ich jetzt mal den Anfang meiner Kurzgeschichten geschrieben. Da ja nun Ferien sind und kein Lehrer mein Text verbessern könnte habe ich mir gedacht , dass vielleicht jemand von euch meinen Text verbessern könnte.
Wäre sehr nett !
Birthday and Death Day
It was the 11 th of semptember, a normal day, I thought.
Okay not for John, my husband, because it was historischen birthday. On This Day he was a bit irritable ,because he had to work in the World Trade Centre. If I had known that something really horrible Happyend at that time I neuer would have let him go (to work). I had an unpleasant feeling, but at that time I didn't know why....
7:45- John was going to his work, my chillen were going to school and I was staying at home. This unpleasant feeling , it was really strange and it didn't get out of my mind. Something in my head said that I have to go to the WTC to look After John.I thought I'm crazy but today I'm dumbfounded, because my mind was right.
Because I didn't lost this strange feeling,I went to the Shopping Centre near the WTC. -Somewhat distraction wont do an harm- I thought.
I was walking across the street while I saw a plane in the air. Suddendly I realized that the plane was flying towards the WTC. I was shocked.
Then a loud noise resounded and the people were screaming and shouting, because the plane crashed into the WTC.
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So das ist jetzt mal der Anfang meiner Short Story.
Danke schonmal 