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Filmvortrag für die Schule Bitte Lesen!

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Hey ich brauch mal Hilfe für meinen Filmvortrag in Englisch. Bin echt nicht gut in Englisch die Rechtschreibung ist nicht so wichtig es ist mehr die Grammatik die stimmen muss. Freue mich uber Ratschläge :D

Today I would like to talk about a film that I saw recently. The film is called "The Hobbit: The Battle of the Five Armies". It’s an epic fantasy adventure film and was directed by Peter Jackson. The film was released on 10 December 2014 in Germany. It’s was produced by Carolynne Cunningham, Zane Weiner, Fran Walsh and Peter Jackson. The soundtrack and the special effects are amazing. The film has been nominated for one Oscars and received an award for the” Truly Moving Picture Award” and for the “Best Visual Effects”. The film is the third part in the three-part film adaptation based on the novel The Hobbit by J. R. R. Tolkien. The Hobbit is the prehistory to Peter Jackson’s “The Lord of the Rings film trilogy’’. The main characters are Martin Freeman as Bilbo Beutlin, Ian McKellen as Gandalf and Richard Armitage as Thorin Eichenschild. The last part concentrated on the battle of the five armies, a battle between elves, dwarves, humans, orcs and eagles as well as the effects of Thorin’s dragon disease.


Before I begin to talk about the storyline it’s good to know that Bilbo Beutlin is together with thirteen dwarves and one sorcerer on the way to the lonely mountain. In this mountain are an old leaved dwarf city, only a dragon live there. The dwarves appoint the hobbit to a master thief and promise Bilbo a four-tenths of the treasure. For that must Bilbo help the dwarves to become back the treasure. On the way to the mountain Bilbo founded the own ring with the power to make him invisible.

At the begin of the film the Dragon is rage because Bilbo has steal a golden cup and the dragon think that the people form Seestadt are the thieves. The dragon destroy Seestadt but the archer Bard kill the dragon and save the people. The citizens from Seestadt are homeless and need help from the elves. The three fractions stand facing each other and will fight for the treasure. But before the battle start came the orcs and the three fractions of elves, humans and dwarves join together and become help from the eagles and fighting versus the orc army.

In my opinion was this one of the best adventure film I’ve ever seen. I’d definitely recommend it.

Keswick (Contributor)

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GoldenFox000 hat geschrieben:Hey ich brauch mal Hilfe für meinen Filmvortrag in Englisch. Bin echt nicht gut in Englisch die Rechtschreibung ist nicht so wichtig es ist mehr die Grammatik die stimmen muss. Freue mich uber Ratschläge :D

Today I would like to talk about a film that I watched recently. The film is called "The Hobbit: The Battle of the Five Armies". It’s an epic fantasy adventure film and was directed by Peter Jackson. The film was released in Germany on Decemver 10, 2014. It was produced by Carolynne Cunningham, Zane Weiner, Fran Walsh and Peter Jackson. The soundtrack and the special effects are amazing. The film has been nominated for one Oscars and received an award for the” Truly Moving Picture Award” and for the “Best Visual Effects”. The film is the third part in the three-part film adaptation based on the novel The Hobbit by J. R. R. Tolkien. The Hobbit is the prehistory to Peter Jackson’s “The Lord of the Rings film trilogy’’. The main characters are Martin Freeman as Bilbo Baggins (I would use the original name), Ian McKellen as Gandalf and Richard Armitage as Thorin Oakenshield (I would use the original name). The last part focuses on the battle of the five armies, a battle between elves, dwarves, humans, orcs and eagles as well as the effects of Thorin’s dragon disease. (it is not really a dragon disease as such, is it? It's a disease caused by greed)


Before I begin to talk about the storyline it would be an advantage to know that Bilbo Baggins is together with thirteen dwarves and one sorcerer is on the way to the Lonely Mountain. This mountain hides an old deserted dwarven city, but now only a dragon lives there. The dwarves appoint the hobbit as the master thief and promise Bilbo a four-tenths of the treasure. In return Bilbo must help the dwarves to get back the treasure that can be found within Erebor. On the way to the mountain Bilbo finds the one ring that grants him the power of invisibility.

At the beginning of the film the dragon is outraged because Bilbo has stolen a golden cup and the dragon think that the people form Laketown (I would use the original name) are the thieves. The dragon destroys Laketown but the archer Bard kills the dragon and saves the people. The citizens of Laketown are homeless and need help from the elves. The three fractions (please specify) stand facing each other and are willing to fight for the treasure. But before the battle starts came the orcs arrive and the three fractions of elves, humans and dwarves join together and get help from the eagles and to fight against the army of orcs.In my opinion was this one of the best adventure film I’ve ever seen. I’d definitely recommend it.
I personally would elaborate on why the elves, humans, dwarves fight. Every fraction has its own reason to fight at Erebor, for example the dwarves want their home and gold back, but why do the elves and humans and orc fight this battle? You should make this clearer.