presentational letter

[jonasnm]

Hallo,

I'd highly appreciate if somebody could have a look at my presentational letter and check it for grammar, vocabulary, forumaltions etc. Would be really helpful as I want to apply very soon.


I am interested in applying for the Summer Fellowship program.
On my search for a fitting internship my brother, who is doing research at ...., suggested me to have a look on the official website. It occurred then that this institute and its program for undergraduate students indeed seemed to be very suitable for me. I am highly motivated to engage in challenging research projects through which I want to learn, understand, gain experience and get deep insights into frontier science and research life. I believe I also would be an asset to your program because of my background, scientific curiosity, interests, ability to learn fast and having the enthusiasm to make the best out of it.
I am a physics student currently working on my Bachelor thesis at Ludwig Maximilian University in Munich and finishing my degree in June. In my work, I am investigating graphene quantum dots and one of the main used techniques is transient absorption spectroscopy. I think this is a very interesting topic and as graphene plays a big role in the research of .... I would be happy to continue to work in a relating field in the summer. Nevertheless, I am equally open to follow other paths as well as my interests are broad. In general, the realm of light attracts me. For example, I could imagine myself learning more about nonlinear-optics, atto-science or light harvesting concepts.
As you can retrieve from my CV I have got some useful experiences and skills suitable for this program like excellent communications skills, intercultural skills, being proactive and capacity for team work. Moreover, I worked for a company dedicated to silicon detectors and optical spectroscopy and due to the curriculum of my university I spent some time in laboratories of very different fields every semester.

I feel I resonate with ....’s core spirt and my intrinsic motivation to understand more about the world might someday allow me to participate in casting light to the darkness of the unknown. Therefor I would highly appreciate and be very pleased to take part in the Summer Fellowship program.

Thank your for your consideration,

Sincerely,

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo,

I'd highly appreciate if somebody could have a look at my introduction letter and check it for grammar, vocabulary, wording etc. Would be really helpful as I want to apply very soon.


I am interested in applying for the Summer Fellowship program with XYZ.
During my search for a suitable internship my brother, who is doing research at ...., suggested me to have a look on the official website (welche?). On the website it became clear, that your institute and its program for undergraduate students indeed seems to be very suitable for me. I am highly motivated to engage in challenging research projects through which I am aiming to learn, to understand (was?), to gain experience and to get deeper insights into frontier science and research life. I believe I would also be an asset to your program because of my background, my scientific curiosity, interests, my ability to learn fast and becauase I have the enthusiasm to make the best out of was?
I am a physics student currently working on my Bachelor thesis at Ludwig Maximilian University in Munich and will complete my degree in June. In my field, I am investigating graphene quantum dots and one of the main used techniques is transient absorption spectroscopy. I think this is a very interesting topic and as graphene plays a big role in the research of .... I would be happy to continue to work in a relating field during the summer. Nevertheless, I am equally open to follow other paths as well as as my interests are diversified. In general, the realm of light attracts me. For example, I could imagine myself learning more about nonlinear-optics, atto-science or light harvesting concepts.

As you can see from my CV, I have got some useful experience and skills suitable for this program such as excellent communications skills, intercultural skills, as well as being proactive and being a brilliant team worker. Moreover, I worked for a company dedicated to silicon detectors and optical spectroscopy and due to the curriculum of my university I spent some time in laboratories of very different fields every semester (bring Beispiele, sollten sie nicht im CV stehen).

I do comply with ....’s core values and my intrinsic motivation to understand more about the world might someday allow me to participate in casting light to the darkness of the unknown. Therefor I would highly appreciate and be very pleased to take part in the Summer Fellowship program.

Thank your for your consideration,

Sincerely,