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Nickname28

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Hay,
wäre sehr dankbar über eine Korrektur meines Textes :)


The Text, Kommission soll Deutsch schützen
” was published by the Hamburger Abendblatt. It was written by Sandra Pabst and tells about the decreasing importance of the German language.
A committee has the notion to use the German language in Germany and to avoid English verbalisms. The German language is a part of our culture and has to be retained.
Despite of bad knowledge, there are often used English instead of the Germans words on public places. Additional to the English terms a German translation is claimed.
An expert of the CDU is claiming for a generally intelligible language in explicit situations in our everyday-life. The government should use their influence into German companies to improve the situation. The SPD is also consider this problem but won’t come back to an only German speaking society.
The committee is also concerned about the German importance in the scientist and economy. Something has to change there, too.

Sollte etwas Sinngemäß nicht verstanden werden, einfach melden (würde mich nicht wundern). :D

kurian

Re: kurzen Text korrigieren, bitte schnellst möglich ;)

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Hey,habe versucht dein Text zu korrigieren.Hoffe die Bedeutung hat sich night geaendert.The article,"Kommission soll Deutsch schützen"
was published by the Hamburger Abendblatt. It was written by Sandra Pabst and emphasizes about the gradual decline of German language.
A committee has the right to use the German language in Germany to avoid English verbalisms. The German language is a part of our culture and has to be retained.
Yet, English words are more preferred instead of Germans words in public places. Additionally, for those inevitable English terms, a German translation is mandatory.
An expert of the CDU is claiming for a universal language in explicit situations in our everyday-life. The government should use their influence on German companies to improve the situation. The SPD has also considerd this problem however, it won’t come back to an only German speaking society.
The committee is also concerned about the German importance in the science and economy. Something has to change there, too.