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[LisaS]

Dear Mr ...

I am writing to you because the advertisement from April 21 st in the Times newspaper about spendig a year at a Brithish High School. I would like to apply for a place.

I am 14 years old and have a good level of English but I would like to improve my language skills. I am a hard working, organized and friendly person and a . My hobbies are horse riding, playing the guitarr, reading and meeting new people.

Thank you for reading. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
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Sabine ********

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Dear Mr ...

I am writing to you in regards to your advertisement from April 21, in The Times newspaper about spendig a year at a British High School. I would like to apply for a place.

I am 14 years old and have a good level of English but I would like to improve my language skills. I am a hard working, organized and friendly person and a (..and a what? Something is missing here). My hobbies are horse riding, playing the guitar, reading and meeting new people.

Thank you for reading. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
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Sabine ********

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