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[LisaS]

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Dear Mr ...

I am writing to you about the advertisement in the newspaper. I would love to work for you in the Hilton Hotel this summer.

I am 14 years old and have a good level of English but I would like to improve my language skills. That is why I am looking for a job, IN DEM MAN ENGLISCH SPRECHEN MUSS. I am a hard working, organized and friendly person and a fast learner too. I have work experience in PÄDAGOGIK, HOTEL UND GASTGEWERBE and working in a team. My hobbies are horse riding, playing the guitarr, reading and meeting new people.

Thank you for reading. I Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
***********
Sabine ********

[Delfino]

Dear Mr ...,

I am writing to you in regard to your advertisement which I noticed in the newspaper.
This summer I would really like to work for you at the Hilton Hotel in London.

As you can see in my enclosed CV, I am 14 years old. Although my level of English is good,
I am looking for opportunities to improve my language skills. Therefore, I am interested in
a job which allows me to practise and to extend my English skills.

I am a conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to detail. I'm flexible,
quick to pick up new skills and eager to learn from others. I also have lots of ideas and
enthusiasm. I'm keen to work for a company with a great reputation and a high profile
like Hilton Hotels & Resorts.

My extensive vacation work experience in paedagogy and the hospitality industry
has given me varied skills and the ability to work with many different types of people.
I believe I could fit easily into your team.

In my spare time I enjoy horse riding, playing the guitar, reading and meeting new people.

Thank you for taking the time to consider this application,
and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours sincerely,

Sabine *******

Good luck!