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[sunshineh]

Who are you and your family?
A very funny thing that happened at school this year was, that my teacher came to school on Sunday. No child was there. He tought, that it was Monday. What's with your school?

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

How are you and your family?
A very funny thing that happened at school this year was that my teacher came to school on a Sunday. No child was there. He thought that it was Monday. What's your school like?

Ööööhm, was genau sollen wir damit nun tun? Ich habe mal die Fehlerlein verbessert, OK?

Grüße
Duckduck

[sunshineh]

Danke!
War ein Text meiner Tochter und mein Schulenglisch ist nun schon so viele Jahre her, deshalb war ich mir nicht so ganz sicher...

[sunshineh]

Hi, thanks für die Verbesserung!

Ich hätte hier nochmals einen Text (Brief) zum Verbessern von ihr:

Hi,
On Saturday we can go the the cinema. We can watch there the film "The Birthday". "The Birthday" is a film. In the film is a pirate who has birthday. But the capitan don't like the pirate and so he give the pirate fly mushrooms to lunch. The pirate thought that he can eat it and so he die.
And on Sunday morning, we can go the a farm. We can ride the horses and feed the cows. It gaves cats, cows, horses, dogs, pigs, sheep, chicken and ducks.
We can play with them. Of course we must help, too.
In the afternoon, we can go to the swimming pool. It gaves five big slides and a big baby pool. It will be great!

[Delfino]

Hi, danke für die Verbesserung!

Ich habe hier nochmals einen Text (Brief) von ihr
zum Verbessern:

Hi,

On Saturday we can go the the cinema.
We can watch the film "The Birthday" there.
"The Birthday" is a film.
In this film is a pirate who has his birthday.
But the capitan doesn't like the pirate, and so he gives the pirate a fly agaric for lunch.
The pirate dies, because he thought he can eat it.

And on Sunday morning, we can go to a farm.
We can ride the horses and feed the cows.
There are cats, cows, horses, dogs, pigs, sheep, chicken and ducks.
We can play with them.
Of course we must help, too.
In the afternoon, we can go to the swimming pool.
There are five big water slides and a big baby pool.
It will be great!

It gaves... ???

Some forum members try to learn German,
so we are to use proper German.