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[Precioso]

Hallo! Ich hab mal versucht einen englischen Text zu schreiben. Leider kann ich nur aufs Schulenglisch zurück greifen (Stand: 7te Klasse Gymnasium) und deswegen ist der Text bestimmt voller Fehler. Wäre sehr toll, wenn sich hier einer bereit erklärt kurz über meinen Text zu schauen und mich auf Fehler aufmerksam zu machen. Schon mal vielen Dank im Voraus ♥


Sometime I sit in front of the window and watching the people. Each of them is unique. Each of them has his story, his worries, fears, but also pleasures and dreams. The woman whit the shopping-bags, the father whit the baby, the girls. The one's fine, the other worse. But all have something together. They are all characterized by their past. Sometimes things happen that make no sense. Things that are just unfair. This includes disease and death. Why it exists? I don't know. But one I know: As hard as it is, as long as it takes, eventually you begins to accept these things. There will always be a part in you that fight, but you will still stand up every morning, breathe, live and in the evening back to sleep. Then all this moments and experiences makes one: you. Its funny what I think, when I look out the window, right? What I want to say, is that there are times that are bad. But exactly this times make you appreciate the good times. Stay strong, even if it's hard, go your way. Never stop! Because if you are staying, nothing will change. Go on, I can't promise you that it will be better, but it will be different, and maybe that make it perfect.

[caro64]

Hallo! Ich hab mal versucht einen englischen Text zu schreiben. Leider kann ich nur aufs Schulenglisch zurück greifen (Stand: 7te Klasse Gymnasium) und deswegen ist der Text bestimmt voller Fehler. Wäre sehr toll, wenn sich hier einer bereit erklärt kurz über meinen Text zu schauen und mich auf Fehler aufmerksam zu machen. Schon mal vielen Dank im Voraus ♥


Sometimes I sit in front of at the window and watching the people. Each one of them is unique. Each one of them has his their own story, his their own worries and fears, but also pleasures and dreams. The woman whit with the shopping-bags, the father whit with the baby, the girls ?The one's some are fine,the other worse some are not but they all have somethingtogether in common. They are all characterized by their pasts (past lifes). Sometimes things can happen that doesn't make no sense. Things that are just unfair. This includes disease and death. Why do they it exists? I don't know. But there is one thing I do know: As hard as it is, as long as it might take eventually you begins to accept these things. There will always be a part in of you that will fight it, but you will still stand get up every morning, breathe, live and in the evening go back to sleep.Then Allthis these moments and experiences makes one:form ? you. Isn't it funny what I think, when I look out of the window? sure is! right? What I want to say, is that there are bad times that are bad. B but exactly this and these exact times make you appreciate the good times. Stay strong, even if it's hard, go your own way. Never stop! Because if you are staying stay put nothing will change. Go on Keep going, I can't promise you that it willbe get better, but it will be different, and maybe that will make it perfect.

Hello Precioso,

You have interesting views - nicht schlecht für 7. Klasse
Best wishes from Caro

[Precioso]

Thank you Caro <3

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo! Ich hab mal versucht einen englischen Text zu schreiben. Leider kann ich nur aufs Schulenglisch zurück greifen (Stand: 7te Klasse Gymnasium) und deswegen ist der Text bestimmt voller Fehler. Wäre sehr toll, wenn sich hier einer bereit erklärt kurz über meinen Text zu schauen und mich auf Fehler aufmerksam zu machen. Schon mal vielen Dank im Voraus ♥


Sometimes I sit in front of at the window and watching the people. Each one of them is unique. Each one of them has his their own story, his their own worries and fears, but also pleasures and dreams. The woman whit with the shopping-bags, the father whit with the baby, the girls ?The one's some are fine,the other worse some are not but they all have somethingtogether in common. They are all characterized by their pasts (past lives)[/color]. Sometimes things can happen that don't make no sense. Things that are just unfair. This includes disease and death. Why do they it exists? I don't know. But there is one thing I do know: As hard as it is, as long as it might take eventually you begins to accept these things. There will always be a part in of you that will fight it, but you will still stand get up every morning, breathe, live and in the evening go back to sleep.Then Allthis these moments and experiences makes one:form?[/color] you. Isn't it funny what I think, when I look out of the window? sure is! right? What I want to say, is that there are bad times that are bad. B but exactly this and these exact times make you appreciate the good times. Stay strong, even if it's hard, go your own way. Never stop! Because if you are staying stay put nothing will change. Go on Keep going, I can't promise you that it willbe get better, but it will be different, and maybe that will make it perfect.

Hello Precioso,

You have interesting views - nicht schlecht für 7. Klasse
Best wishes from Caro

Lovely Caro,
so glad to have you back, two little OOPSES, no doubt put there to test the eyes and mind of the old duck. Old, yes, nearly 50, oh my...  :chief:

[caro64]

Thanks Duckduck - now what would we do without that eagle eye of yours, here..... have a jelly baby